Horse Eden : Critique

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Stables Online: 44

ZequineZ

01:58:05 ZEZ - ZZ

I was just able to click through a whole barn and it didn’t error on me this time

Eyrie of the Stars

01:44:04 Eyrie

I got the error just editing this girl's decor where I wasn't even changing pages XD
-HEE Click-

MakeEm Fancy

01:42:42 Ally 💜

Yeah every other thing I do i get the error

Bangtan Boys

01:38:06 Kas

I had the same error code

Bangtan Boys

01:37:51 Kas

I couldn’t log in for a sec

ZequineZ

01:35:19 ZEZ - ZZ

Here’s a screen recording if it helps
-Click-

Broken Meadows

01:35:02 Fire | BM

Not sure if it helps, but this is what it says when it errors: "403 Permission Denied
You do not have permission for this request /mail2.php?id=277816"

ZequineZ

01:27:49 ZEZ - ZZ

The links don’t appear different when they error vs when they don’t for me, and i can refresh the page or paste the same link and not get an error the next try

ZequineZ

01:22:19 ZEZ - ZZ

This is what is up top when it errors in bottle rolling the dice
-HEE Click-

Pegasus Lane

01:21:50 Peggy (or) Peg

-HEE Click-
Try this?

ZequineZ

01:21:23 ZEZ - ZZ

I’m playing beetle right now and it’s doing it a lot when I roll the dice, it’s not every roll but very frequent every 2-4 rolls
It also did it when I first logged in then clicked on my mail notification, it a,so did it when I switched back to this account from my other account.
My other account is the one It did it a few times paying my riders in there

Lucky Ducky Lane

01:21:01

I got that too switching to sales chat. Sorry Eve - didn't grab a link

Cadence Farms

01:18:56 evebot

Can you guys post a link that gives the error?

Rusty Medows

01:13:43 Rusty

Welp I’m going to sleep night guys

Rusty Medows

01:11:07 Rusty

I know what a VPN is I just don’t know if I have one or not I’m not the one who deals with the internet xD

ZequineZ

01:10:56 ZEZ - ZZ

I’m on nbn wifi at home, no vpns here

ZequineZ

01:10:01 ZEZ - ZZ

Seems so what random, I’ll be good for a few clicks then it does it again, refreshing seems to work most of the time

Bioshock Manor

01:09:30 Storm

VPN is your own private network. Likely sure you'd know if you had one

Bioshock Manor

01:08:51 Storm

Just totally bugged the entire site for me. Had to close the tab and search for horse eden again

Gem

01:07:50 Gem

Getting the same issue on iPhone, cell service

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ZequineZ

01:58:05 ZEZ - ZZ

I was just able to click through a whole barn and it didn’t error on me this time

Eyrie of the Stars

01:44:04 Eyrie

I got the error just editing this girl's decor where I wasn't even changing pages XD
-HEE Click-

MakeEm Fancy

01:42:42 Ally 💜

Yeah every other thing I do i get the error

Bangtan Boys

01:38:06 Kas

I had the same error code

Bangtan Boys

01:37:51 Kas

I couldn’t log in for a sec

ZequineZ

01:35:19 ZEZ - ZZ

Here’s a screen recording if it helps
-Click-

Broken Meadows

01:35:02 Fire | BM

Not sure if it helps, but this is what it says when it errors: "403 Permission Denied
You do not have permission for this request /mail2.php?id=277816"

ZequineZ

01:27:49 ZEZ - ZZ

The links don’t appear different when they error vs when they don’t for me, and i can refresh the page or paste the same link and not get an error the next try

ZequineZ

01:22:19 ZEZ - ZZ

This is what is up top when it errors in bottle rolling the dice
-HEE Click-

Pegasus Lane

01:21:50 Peggy (or) Peg

-HEE Click-
Try this?

ZequineZ

01:21:23 ZEZ - ZZ

Lucky Ducky Lane

01:21:01

I got that too switching to sales chat. Sorry Eve - didn't grab a link

Cadence Farms

01:18:56 evebot

Can you guys post a link that gives the error?

Rusty Medows

01:13:43 Rusty

Welp I’m going to sleep night guys

Rusty Medows

01:11:07 Rusty

I know what a VPN is I just don’t know if I have one or not I’m not the one who deals with the internet xD

ZequineZ

01:10:56 ZEZ - ZZ

I’m on nbn wifi at home, no vpns here

ZequineZ

01:10:01 ZEZ - ZZ

Seems so what random, I’ll be good for a few clicks then it does it again, refreshing seems to work most of the time

Bioshock Manor

01:09:30 Storm

VPN is your own private network. Likely sure you'd know if you had one

Bioshock Manor

01:08:51 Storm

Just totally bugged the entire site for me. Had to close the tab and search for horse eden again

Gem

01:07:50 Gem

Getting the same issue on iPhone, cell service

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March 25, 2019 02:45 PM

Zephyr Elites

Posts: 4154
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Would love some critique on my most recent pieces.

*Click for better quality*

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WEW5xx.jpg

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WTfdVT.jpg

Also I currently have my prices set at 35k for a horse avatar, just wanted to know if you guys think thats too high.

Thanks.

Edited at March 25, 2019 03:02 PM by Zephyr Elites

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March 25, 2019 02:58 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
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Hmm I can't see anything that I personally think could be improved , very pretty art though! :)

Critique

March 26, 2019 12:43 PM

Former Stable

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For the first one, the horse looks like it's in blue or white light, while the background would be giving off orange/red light. The horse is also pretty light for the darkness of the background.

For the second one, I would work on adding shading to the mane and tail, because they don't look connected to the rest of the horse. I would also work on where shadows would be cast based on where the light is coming from.

Critique

March 29, 2019 04:30 PM

Cedar Brook

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I think the prices are fine. Keep practising and getting better!♡

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April 5, 2019 12:51 AM

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Personally, I feel like the patterns on the first are too bright for the overall tone and lighting.The muzzle is also slightly blurred. I do love the movement of the tail on the second, very natural.

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