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Two Trees Stables
04:37:24 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Gem
*hugs, & Gives you a care package*
Gemstone Stable
04:35:25 Snow❆Gem
I am now taking Robitusson congestion luquid stuff from off the shelf and doing warm eye compressions. If it doesn't get better within 24-48 hours, I'll be going somewhwhere.
Two Trees Stables
04:34:30 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Aww, I'm sorry Gem
I've had a sore throat for a couple days now and it's driving me crazy
Gemstone Stable
04:33:20 Snow❆Gem
@bay

No, I don't have a doctor no insurance. (Still looking for a job...) I'd have to go to a 'quick care' place. *sigh*
Two Trees Stables
04:32:55 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Gem
Maybe it's time for a doctor
Angels angels
04:32:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Hopefully lol and the lack of sabino is always nice
Rising Stars Stable
04:32:16 Willow ~ AA Breeder
She should give you some nice WEE++ combo foals
Glacier Bay Cove
04:32:06 Arctic Katz
Did you go to the doctor, Gem
Rising Stars Stable
04:31:28 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
I hate her color, but her training should hopefully be decent
Angels angels
04:31:08 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Yeah but she could still wnd up being a good producer lol
Rising Stars Stable
04:30:23 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Angel
good luck with Bella
I'm still mad at her for that week 5
Gemstone Stable
04:29:14 Snow❆Gem
I just wanna be done with this cold already! I feel kinda worn out from not doing much, lack of sleep for almost a week, and then the cold systypoms themselves... O.o
Crestwood Eq.
04:28:44 Ivy / poison ivy
Loonnnyyyyy
God is Mighty Stable
04:28:44 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Hey Ivy!
Angels angels
04:28:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Nah but I am interested to see this week 7 and week 4
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
04:28:21 Ivy / poison ivy
WILLLOOOWWW

hiii
Crestwood Eq.
04:28:13 Ivy / poison ivy
back
Greenheart Stables
04:27:42 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Angel
Thannks, I should've clarified Leopard in general lol
Rising Stars Stable
04:27:40 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Anyone else nerves for week 5s?
Angels angels
04:26:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel
So the genetics for leopard is Lplp P1

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Two Trees Stables
04:37:24 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Gem
*hugs, & Gives you a care package*
Gemstone Stable
04:35:25 Snow❆Gem
I am now taking Robitusson congestion luquid stuff from off the shelf and doing warm eye compressions. If it doesn't get better within 24-48 hours, I'll be going somewhwhere.
Two Trees Stables
04:34:30 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Aww, I'm sorry Gem
I've had a sore throat for a couple days now and it's driving me crazy
Gemstone Stable
04:33:20 Snow❆Gem
@bay

No, I don't have a doctor no insurance. (Still looking for a job...) I'd have to go to a 'quick care' place. *sigh*
Two Trees Stables
04:32:55 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Gem
Maybe it's time for a doctor
Angels angels
04:32:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Hopefully lol and the lack of sabino is always nice
Rising Stars Stable
04:32:16 Willow ~ AA Breeder
She should give you some nice WEE++ combo foals
Glacier Bay Cove
04:32:06 Arctic Katz
Did you go to the doctor, Gem
Rising Stars Stable
04:31:28 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
I hate her color, but her training should hopefully be decent
Angels angels
04:31:08 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Yeah but she could still wnd up being a good producer lol
Rising Stars Stable
04:30:23 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Angel
good luck with Bella
I'm still mad at her for that week 5
Gemstone Stable
04:29:14 Snow❆Gem
I just wanna be done with this cold already! I feel kinda worn out from not doing much, lack of sleep for almost a week, and then the cold systypoms themselves... O.o
Crestwood Eq.
04:28:44 Ivy / poison ivy
Loonnnyyyyy
God is Mighty Stable
04:28:44 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Hey Ivy!
Angels angels
04:28:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Nah but I am interested to see this week 7 and week 4
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
04:28:21 Ivy / poison ivy
WILLLOOOWWW

hiii
Crestwood Eq.
04:28:13 Ivy / poison ivy
back
Greenheart Stables
04:27:42 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Angel
Thannks, I should've clarified Leopard in general lol
Rising Stars Stable
04:27:40 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Anyone else nerves for week 5s?
Angels angels
04:26:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel
So the genetics for leopard is Lplp P1

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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