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Horse Eden Eventing Game

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05:07:53 Star - RID|KNN

Girl I just got rid of my breed a brindle quest this morning that I held onto for more than a week..
-HEE Click-

05:05:56 Ivy / poison ivy

it's easy stuff anyway

05:05:38 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

i do virtual school so im on my computer all the time anyway. i make it work

Gem Queens Estate

05:04:55 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

I see. I've been there. BUT, looking back... I should have done the tough stuff before HEE. :(

05:04:36 Ivy / poison ivy

gem

now how did that happen ?? XD

Glacier Bay Cove

05:04:21 Arctic Katz

I ended up skipping that quest, Gem

05:03:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

true! Dual hard work. doing schoolwork right now too xD

Gem Queens Estate

05:03:34 Snow❆Gem

Breed a triple Premium Pearl horse (ee Prlprl CcrC)

SWE x ESS = PEE? lol

-HEE Click-

Gem Queens Estate

05:02:47 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Its called working hard. lol

05:01:03 Ivy / poison ivy

gem

like fanta said though. it's slow xD

Gem Queens Estate

05:00:41 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

OK. :)

04:59:36 Ivy / poison ivy

snow

and i'm in a pinch

Gem Queens Estate

04:59:15 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Yup, that works in a pinch. :D

04:56:06 Ivy / poison ivy

Fanta

yep

04:55:57 Ivy / poison ivy

it's a profit sooooo xD

04:55:30 Fantasy | Fanta

Ivy
It is a slow but rewarding process, that I can tell you :P

04:53:50 Ivy / poison ivy

buying cheap 2 year olds with bad ratings and FRing

04:53:04 Fantasy | Fanta

Ivy
Feel like sharing? :3

04:51:13 Ivy / poison ivy

omg. i have a great idea for money making...

Gem Queens Estate

04:50:51 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Ah yes. Everything comes and goes. I have pretty 'keepers' that I'll end up FRing becuase they don't show well or I need room.

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05:07:53 Star - RID|KNN

Girl I just got rid of my breed a brindle quest this morning that I held onto for more than a week..
-HEE Click-

05:05:56 Ivy / poison ivy

it's easy stuff anyway

05:05:38 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

i do virtual school so im on my computer all the time anyway. i make it work

Gem Queens Estate

05:04:55 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

I see. I've been there. BUT, looking back... I should have done the tough stuff before HEE. :(

05:04:36 Ivy / poison ivy

gem

now how did that happen ?? XD

Glacier Bay Cove

05:04:21 Arctic Katz

I ended up skipping that quest, Gem

05:03:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

true! Dual hard work. doing schoolwork right now too xD

Gem Queens Estate

05:03:34 Snow❆Gem

Breed a triple Premium Pearl horse (ee Prlprl CcrC)

SWE x ESS = PEE? lol

-HEE Click-

Gem Queens Estate

05:02:47 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Its called working hard. lol

05:01:03 Ivy / poison ivy

gem

like fanta said though. it's slow xD

Gem Queens Estate

05:00:41 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

OK. :)

04:59:36 Ivy / poison ivy

snow

and i'm in a pinch

Gem Queens Estate

04:59:15 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Yup, that works in a pinch. :D

04:56:06 Ivy / poison ivy

Fanta

yep

04:55:57 Ivy / poison ivy

it's a profit sooooo xD

04:55:30 Fantasy | Fanta

Ivy
It is a slow but rewarding process, that I can tell you :P

04:53:50 Ivy / poison ivy

buying cheap 2 year olds with bad ratings and FRing

04:53:04 Fantasy | Fanta

Ivy
Feel like sharing? :3

04:51:13 Ivy / poison ivy

omg. i have a great idea for money making...

Gem Queens Estate

04:50:51 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Ah yes. Everything comes and goes. I have pretty 'keepers' that I'll end up FRing becuase they don't show well or I need room.

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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