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Fluffy's Cosy Home

06:56:50 Fluffy

Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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ZequineZ

06:30:31 ZEZ - ZZ

Heart glass and intelligence glass, 80k each
Capture passes 1k
Gold embryo tokens 5k
Colt embryo 3k
-HEE Click-

Alpine Acres

06:27:01 Lily/Alpine

Clifftop Appy art auction
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Boulder Creek

05:52:12

Vancouver

05:07:26 Ana

3 up week 7 freshie!
-HEE Click-

Circle Star TBs

04:35:31 Lily

Peacock appy KNN, will set free if not bought
-HEE Click-

Wild Wind Stables

04:34:31 Wind

-- Selling--
EPP Perlino Dun Rabicano Appendix colt
PEE Silver Roan Grullo Rabicano ISH filly
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Neverhof Palace

04:29:51

EWW ISH Stallion, up for only 10k!
-HEE Click-

Alpine Acres

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Tack giveaway!
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Hopes Life

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

Casanova

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#85834
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

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November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

Former Stable

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OMG!! Love It!

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November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

Former Stable

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

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November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

Casanova

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

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November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

Former Stable

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how do you make art?

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November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

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November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

Casanova

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

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November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

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November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

Former Stable

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

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November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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