Horse Eden : Critique

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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Stables Online: 76

Skyward Stud

11:05:59 Skrangle

still can't believe my luck -HEE Click-

Tobiano Lady

11:04:15 Tobi | Nix

Congrats Eagle!

Eagles Peak

11:03:13

um i think this is my first all up week 4 lol -HEE Click-

Hummingbird Meadows

11:01:30 Bird

Argh, I'm trying to decide if I need to take Finley To the vet because his stool seems to be soft all the time.

Eagles Peak

11:00:16

Is there a way to donate ebs to a club?

Skyward Stud

10:57:53 Skrangle

I had no idea that eyes could be heterochromatic in this game!

ZequineZ

10:37:18 ZEZ - ZZ

I feel like brass is one of those ones that needs soldering but I’ve never looked much into plumbing myself, definitely YouTube it at the least I reckon

Galloping_Gems

10:25:13 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
The pretty ones always rate shitty 😭

Galloping_Gems

10:22:44 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
Just caught this girl a hour ago

Cloud Peak Stables

10:06:05 Cloud

A 2-3 in dia. brass main line is a pretty major pipe to be fixing. You're better off asking a plumber (or maybe Youtube? lol) for that one.

Hummingbird Meadows

10:05:59 Bird

@Dulcie, sounds like a job for a plumber.

Frog Judgment Acers

09:59:11 Dulcie/Crazy

Anyone on know about pipe fixing?
The main coming into the shared vacation cabin broke because it was left on over the winter by a relative
I think its like 2 or 3 inches & brass
Im planning to go up there soon & fix it but need to know what tools to bring

Tobiano Lady

09:52:17 Tobi | Nix

I'm glad you got something out of it as well!

Cloud Peak Stables

09:52:16 Cloud

And I'm happy to help with my own studs too <3 Bummer that my freebie straw was a color dud.

Cloud Peak Stables

09:49:22 Cloud

Of course <3 Glacialis looked promising and I loved his color. He not only landed high on the LB but he gave me lots of pretty foals too :)

Tobiano Lady

09:47:14 Tobi | Nix

*my studs & other people's studs. Should have clarified lol

Tobiano Lady

09:46:32 Tobi | Nix

Thank you again Cloud. I'm usually floundering a bit with studs so any amount of help is huge to me <3

Cloud Peak Stables

09:44:18 Cloud

lol oh no Tobi!

Tobiano Lady

09:38:51 Tobi | Nix

-HEE Click-
dodging your dad's tobi like it's an olympic sport

Just Dreaming

09:22:01

-HEE Click-

I cant tell if this is cute

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Skyward Stud

11:05:59 Skrangle

still can't believe my luck -HEE Click-

Tobiano Lady

11:04:15 Tobi | Nix

Congrats Eagle!

Eagles Peak

11:03:13

um i think this is my first all up week 4 lol -HEE Click-

Hummingbird Meadows

11:01:30 Bird

Argh, I'm trying to decide if I need to take Finley To the vet because his stool seems to be soft all the time.

Eagles Peak

11:00:16

Is there a way to donate ebs to a club?

Skyward Stud

10:57:53 Skrangle

I had no idea that eyes could be heterochromatic in this game!

ZequineZ

10:37:18 ZEZ - ZZ

I feel like brass is one of those ones that needs soldering but I’ve never looked much into plumbing myself, definitely YouTube it at the least I reckon

Galloping_Gems

10:25:13 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
The pretty ones always rate shitty 😭

Galloping_Gems

10:22:44 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
Just caught this girl a hour ago

Cloud Peak Stables

10:06:05 Cloud

A 2-3 in dia. brass main line is a pretty major pipe to be fixing. You're better off asking a plumber (or maybe Youtube? lol) for that one.

Hummingbird Meadows

10:05:59 Bird

@Dulcie, sounds like a job for a plumber.

Frog Judgment Acers

09:59:11 Dulcie/Crazy

Tobiano Lady

09:52:17 Tobi | Nix

I'm glad you got something out of it as well!

Cloud Peak Stables

09:52:16 Cloud

And I'm happy to help with my own studs too <3 Bummer that my freebie straw was a color dud.

Cloud Peak Stables

09:49:22 Cloud

Of course <3 Glacialis looked promising and I loved his color. He not only landed high on the LB but he gave me lots of pretty foals too :)

Tobiano Lady

09:47:14 Tobi | Nix

*my studs & other people's studs. Should have clarified lol

Tobiano Lady

09:46:32 Tobi | Nix

Thank you again Cloud. I'm usually floundering a bit with studs so any amount of help is huge to me <3

Cloud Peak Stables

09:44:18 Cloud

lol oh no Tobi!

Tobiano Lady

09:38:51 Tobi | Nix

-HEE Click-
dodging your dad's tobi like it's an olympic sport

Just Dreaming

09:22:01

-HEE Click-

I cant tell if this is cute

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Critique

July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

Critique

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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