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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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Nightingales Ridge

03:15:52 Issy

Looky hahah 🥰🥰🐿

Nightingales Ridge

03:15:23 Issy

03:15:09 Stella

Does anyone know if there will be other mane & tail or another discipline/tack being added in the future? I love the different manes & tails

Nightingales Ridge

03:14:41 Issy

Eh whys it not working

Nightingales Ridge

03:14:27 Issy

Nightingales Ridge

03:14:09 Issy

Just wanted to share how cute it look with a chipmunk riding on the back
-HEE Click-

Cloud Peak Stables

03:14:01 Cloud

It never seems to be predictable for me, but there are times when I just have to leave because I can't accomplish much of anything.

03:13:56 Lillie

-HEE Click-
Oh wow I didnt even notice she was chimera its so subtle

Minerva

03:12:27 Min

100%! Sometimes it's absolutely fine, but often around this time in the evening it can get unplayably bad- even with only one tab open

Cloud Peak Stables

03:10:40 Cloud

lol Min. It will be nice to see a speedier site.

Minerva

03:08:22 Min

Lol the irony about the game having too much lag to say I'm ecstatic about the server situation changes haha

03:07:04 Ivy / poison ivy

Fanta

How are ya?

02:53:42 Anna/Jewel

Hiya, Ivy

02:53:32 Fantasy | Fanta

Hey Ivy!

02:50:41 Ivy / poison ivy

Fantaaaa!

02:46:33 Anna/Jewel

Swanky- well I hope you the best of luck even if you can't restart your lines.

02:45:12 Fantasy | Fanta

Maybe an SD PON palomino project or something. I have no idea.

02:43:42 Swanky

I have a feeling the mare must not be in the database. Welp, there goes my hope for restarting my lines. Thanks everybody for the help!

02:40:51 Fantasy | Fanta

I want to start a color project... But I don't have the space or the funds or any idea what breed to do. Mostly I'm just bored lol

02:34:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel

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Nightingales Ridge

03:15:52 Issy

Looky hahah 🥰🥰🐿

Nightingales Ridge

03:15:23 Issy

03:15:09 Stella

Does anyone know if there will be other mane & tail or another discipline/tack being added in the future? I love the different manes & tails

Nightingales Ridge

03:14:41 Issy

Eh whys it not working

Nightingales Ridge

03:14:27 Issy

Nightingales Ridge

03:14:09 Issy

Just wanted to share how cute it look with a chipmunk riding on the back
-HEE Click-

Cloud Peak Stables

03:14:01 Cloud

It never seems to be predictable for me, but there are times when I just have to leave because I can't accomplish much of anything.

03:13:56 Lillie

-HEE Click-
Oh wow I didnt even notice she was chimera its so subtle

Minerva

03:12:27 Min

100%! Sometimes it's absolutely fine, but often around this time in the evening it can get unplayably bad- even with only one tab open

Cloud Peak Stables

03:10:40 Cloud

lol Min. It will be nice to see a speedier site.

Minerva

03:08:22 Min

Lol the irony about the game having too much lag to say I'm ecstatic about the server situation changes haha

03:07:04 Ivy / poison ivy

Fanta

How are ya?

02:53:42 Anna/Jewel

Hiya, Ivy

02:53:32 Fantasy | Fanta

Hey Ivy!

02:50:41 Ivy / poison ivy

Fantaaaa!

02:46:33 Anna/Jewel

Swanky- well I hope you the best of luck even if you can't restart your lines.

02:45:12 Fantasy | Fanta

Maybe an SD PON palomino project or something. I have no idea.

02:43:42 Swanky

I have a feeling the mare must not be in the database. Welp, there goes my hope for restarting my lines. Thanks everybody for the help!

02:40:51 Fantasy | Fanta

I want to start a color project... But I don't have the space or the funds or any idea what breed to do. Mostly I'm just bored lol

02:34:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel

So you can still access their page and don't just get an error lol

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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