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Angels angels
10:19:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
You can turn the notifications for it off lol
Kingswood Eq
10:19:05 ghost
it really never does XD
CWY country
10:18:59 C
The amount of misses :( XD.
Sleepwalker Centre
10:18:46 Walker
ghost,
you're welcome
Crestwood Eq.
10:18:45 Ivy / poison ivy
ghost

it never ends
Kingswood Eq
10:18:30 ghost
its been literally 2 minutes since i got rid of all my notifications and i already have 33 more
CWY country
10:16:08 C
I just made myself a target XD.
KPH Equestrian
10:15:46 Rapcoon | Jester
xD
Sleepwalker Centre
10:15:32 Walker
Jester,
>rotates ominously in your direction<

Ivy,
loll
Crestwood Eq.
10:14:59 Ivy / poison ivy
walker

whats funny is that i told you to move and then i hit you 6x in a row before you moved xD
KPH Equestrian
10:14:53 Rapcoon | Jester
walker
I may be a dangerous mix of tired and stupid, but I read that as 'rotates ominously'😭
CWY country
10:14:51 C
I've got forty matches for my WB, and seven matches for my TB.
Sleepwalker Centre
10:13:38 Walker
Ivy,
>rotates continously<
Crestwood Eq.
10:11:39 Ivy / poison ivy
ghost

xD
Kingswood Eq
10:11:29 ghost
oh dear, ive given up splatting people now xd
Crestwood Eq.
10:11:19 Ivy / poison ivy
1796*
Crestwood Eq.
10:11:13 Ivy / poison ivy
ghost

i have another 1769 to use
Kingswood Eq
10:10:52 ghost
The amount of water balloons that I'm being splatted with is ridiculous omg
Crestwood Eq.
10:10:25 Ivy / poison ivy
walker

turn around a smidge to the left. your target isnt straight in my view
Crestwood Eq.
10:09:41 Ivy / poison ivy
angel

yipeeee

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Angels angels
10:19:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
You can turn the notifications for it off lol
Kingswood Eq
10:19:05 ghost
it really never does XD
CWY country
10:18:59 C
The amount of misses :( XD.
Sleepwalker Centre
10:18:46 Walker
ghost,
you're welcome
Crestwood Eq.
10:18:45 Ivy / poison ivy
ghost

it never ends
Kingswood Eq
10:18:30 ghost
its been literally 2 minutes since i got rid of all my notifications and i already have 33 more
CWY country
10:16:08 C
I just made myself a target XD.
KPH Equestrian
10:15:46 Rapcoon | Jester
xD
Sleepwalker Centre
10:15:32 Walker
Jester,
>rotates ominously in your direction<

Ivy,
loll
Crestwood Eq.
10:14:59 Ivy / poison ivy
walker

whats funny is that i told you to move and then i hit you 6x in a row before you moved xD
KPH Equestrian
10:14:53 Rapcoon | Jester
walker
I may be a dangerous mix of tired and stupid, but I read that as 'rotates ominously'😭
CWY country
10:14:51 C
I've got forty matches for my WB, and seven matches for my TB.
Sleepwalker Centre
10:13:38 Walker
Ivy,
>rotates continously<
Crestwood Eq.
10:11:39 Ivy / poison ivy
ghost

xD
Kingswood Eq
10:11:29 ghost
oh dear, ive given up splatting people now xd
Crestwood Eq.
10:11:19 Ivy / poison ivy
1796*
Crestwood Eq.
10:11:13 Ivy / poison ivy
ghost

i have another 1769 to use
Kingswood Eq
10:10:52 ghost
The amount of water balloons that I'm being splatted with is ridiculous omg
Crestwood Eq.
10:10:25 Ivy / poison ivy
walker

turn around a smidge to the left. your target isnt straight in my view
Crestwood Eq.
10:09:41 Ivy / poison ivy
angel

yipeeee

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Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 04:05 AM


Wings Of Glory
 
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So I have no clue what to price my art at...so if you have suggestions on that those could help as well.
I need some critique on my art. Ive been semi stuck lately on art and its been making me sort of depressed.
Recent art pieces:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/f12d/f/2018/187/c/a/deathappearancehorseavi_by_wsl30horselover10-dcghsz1.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/60bd/f/2018/196/f/7/running_free_horse_avi_by_wsl30horselover10-dchbwgy.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/ce47/f/2018/179/1/4/leaning_ladder_chestnut_mare_art_by_wsl30horselover10-dcfofa8.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/758b/f/2018/196/0/d/jello_entry_by_wsl30horselover10-dchceqg.jpg
So those are a few recent pieces and as I said I would like some critique on my art:)
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:39 PM

Former Stable
 
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no idea what to price them at. but i love these. the brindle is my favorite
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:42 PM

Former Stable
 
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I'd say like 15-25k!
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:43 PM

Former Stable
 
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Jeesh, these are gorgeous! Great work! I like all of them a lot personally <3
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:43 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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First off, you've improved a whole lot! Price wise, maybe 15k for horse avatars and 10k for stable sets :)

Some constructive critiques:
I noticed that your manes and tails are a bit stringy, so try using a larger pixel brush, maybe 2-4px. The shadows are also a bit blobby, so try to place them according to the lighting of the piece. If the sun is in the background, the shadow should be in the foreground. Also try blurring the background just a tad to really focus on the horse. Some of the edges on the horses are a bit choppy, so maybe try using a smaller brush to cut them out as well. Minor details are key :)
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:44 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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Lol thats good then because I currently have them at 25k:)

Lazy C Ranch said:
I'd say like 15-25k!


Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:45 PM

Former Stable
 
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1. The spots on this horse look very green and the front left hoof looks like it should be in the flowers, not on top of them

2. Maybe blur the background a bit to put more focus on the horse and make it bigger. Not a lot needs changing with this one, it already looks well put together.

3. Maybe make the glow a little fainter, the spots look a little unnatural but overall very pretty.

4. Personally, I like horses to be on the left or right side, at about 1/3 of the way along a banner, not right in the middle but the horse and the background match well.
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:50 PM


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Arveline Acres said:
First off, you've improved a whole lot! Price wise, maybe 15k for horse avatars and 10k for stable sets :)

Some constructive critiques:
I noticed that your manes and tails are a bit stringy, so try using a larger pixel brush, maybe 2-4px. The shadows are also a bit blobby, so try to place them according to the lighting of the piece. If the sun is in the background, the shadow should be in the foreground. Also try blurring the background just a tad to really focus on the horse. Some of the edges on the horses are a bit choppy, so maybe try using a smaller brush to cut them out as well. Minor details are key :)


Thank you:)
Although I do think the mane and tails thing could be because I use a mouse but I definitely know what you mean.

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