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Calela Eventing
01:30:30 Cali
Hey Win
Gilded Roses
01:27:29 River / Brody
Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
-HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:43:11 Win | Water
Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.
Red Horizon Ranch
11:42:03 Red
He's so pretty Win
Winter Curtain
11:38:37 Win | Water
Look at this guy -HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:38:08 Win | Water
o
Sierra Views Stable
11:37:44 AZ
Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it
Winter Curtain
11:35:00 Win | Water
How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?
Sierra Views Stable
11:32:43 AZ
-HEE Click- new chimera <3
Dash and Duchess
11:32:06 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm honestly debating whether to give her favorite child featured privileges 🤔
-HEE Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:30:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
you should
Halloween stable
11:29:26 
Does everyone wanna look at my featured horse he is very pretty I think I wanna keep him
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
:'(
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I remember I made this awesome piece which was a white horse (good) with birds and tentacles reaching out and charging at this black horse with ravens and the tentacles (evil apparently) on a bridge with a waterfall in the background and I totally regret it
Dash and Duchess
11:25:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Peggy, yup I feel that 🥲
Dash and Duchess
11:25:23 DD | ~Squizard~
Oop I poofed earlier 😭
Winter Curtain
11:25:00 Win | Water
I have 34k more to breed, and try to get a brindle.
Pegasus Lane
11:24:05 Peggy (or) Peg
I also have an art piece I regret selling 🥲 You live and learn I guess
Halloween stable
11:14:40 
OMG I forgot I had these on my stable
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:10:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
not bad for a quick 30 min piece after three months :)
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Calela Eventing
01:30:30 Cali
Hey Win
Gilded Roses
01:27:29 River / Brody
Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
-HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:43:11 Win | Water
Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.
Red Horizon Ranch
11:42:03 Red
He's so pretty Win
Winter Curtain
11:38:37 Win | Water
Look at this guy -HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:38:08 Win | Water
o
Sierra Views Stable
11:37:44 AZ
Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it
Winter Curtain
11:35:00 Win | Water
How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?
Sierra Views Stable
11:32:43 AZ
-HEE Click- new chimera <3
Dash and Duchess
11:32:06 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm honestly debating whether to give her favorite child featured privileges 🤔
-HEE Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:30:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
you should
Halloween stable
11:29:26 
Does everyone wanna look at my featured horse he is very pretty I think I wanna keep him
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
:'(
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I remember I made this awesome piece which was a white horse (good) with birds and tentacles reaching out and charging at this black horse with ravens and the tentacles (evil apparently) on a bridge with a waterfall in the background and I totally regret it
Dash and Duchess
11:25:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Peggy, yup I feel that 🥲
Dash and Duchess
11:25:23 DD | ~Squizard~
Oop I poofed earlier 😭
Winter Curtain
11:25:00 Win | Water
I have 34k more to breed, and try to get a brindle.
Pegasus Lane
11:24:05 Peggy (or) Peg
I also have an art piece I regret selling 🥲 You live and learn I guess
Halloween stable
11:14:40 
OMG I forgot I had these on my stable
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:10:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
not bad for a quick 30 min piece after three months :)
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First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 10:56 AM


Raven Oak Stables
 
Posts: 225
#259182
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<div style="text-align: center;">Hey guys, this is my first manip and I would like some constructive criticism please.
<div style="text-align: center;">Don't worry about being to harsh, I want to know the truth.
<div style="text-align: center;">This was all done in GIMP.
Credits on image.

https://i.imgur.com/WNlMmyI.png?1
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:01 AM


Mediterranean
 
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Where did the background come from? You'll need to credit it.
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:02 AM

Former Stable
 
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Honestly I don't think it's all that bad, it's pretty good but a shadow and some more shading to really blend the horse with the background would make it even better. And this is just personal preference but maybe a theme that would go better with the name cause when I saw "Monster" that kinda slapped me in the face xD
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:02 AM


Wolfcreek
 
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You could make the horse a tad bit bigger, and draw out the tail more. Some stray hair always make it look more realistic. Also try to match the lights, Your horse has backlight but it's still bright on the side where supposed to be shadows. Otherwise for a first manip it looks great.
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:07 AM


Raven Oak Stables
 
Posts: 225
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Mediterranean said:
Where did the background come from? You'll need to credit it.

<div style="text-align: center;">I honestly don't remember So I'm not going to use it here or anywhere else. I understand the crediting rules, but for the life of me I can't remember where I found that background. I do know it's a stock image though.
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:08 AM


Raven Oak Stables
 
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The Noisy Fam. said:
Honestly I don't think it's all that bad, it's pretty good but a shadow and some more shading to really blend the horse with the background would make it even better. And this is just personal preference but maybe a theme that would go better with the name cause when I saw "Monster" that kinda slapped me in the face xD

<div style="text-align: center;">I know, I just used a name of one of my horses. Obviously something spooky would go better for a horse named monster.

Thank you for the feedback!
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:09 AM


Raven Oak Stables
 
Posts: 225
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Wolfcreek said:
You could make the horse a tad bit bigger, and draw out the tail more. Some stray hair always make it look more realistic. Also try to match the lights, Your horse has backlight but it's still bright on the side where supposed to be shadows. Otherwise for a first manip it looks great.



<div align="center">Great advice! I'm still learning all the tricks in GIMP.

Edited at November 10, 2018 11:13 AM by Reptar
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 01:14 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
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That background is of me, its my own made picture
https://www.deviantart.com/lasrosasnegras/art/Untitled-771655404


You may use it but has to be credited as per my rules :D


The picture looks good so far, well done

Edited at November 10, 2018 01:16 PM by Las Rosas Negras
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 01:15 PM


Raven Oak Stables
 
Posts: 225
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Las Rosas Negras said:
That background is of me, its my own made picture
https://www.deviantart.com/lasrosasnegras/art/Untitled-771655404


You may use it but has to be credited as per my rules :D


<div style="text-align: center;">Thank you! It was driving me crazy!! I appreciate it :] Adding Credits to image now.
First Manip (Critique) November 15, 2018 04:02 PM


Weeping Willow Acres
 
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Nice. All my manips turn out looking like walking blobs.

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