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 Port Royal Equines
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RealTree EQ.
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ViperaVale
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Goldspur
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CM Elegance
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 Port Royal Equines
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Anyone need Decor? Only 50 ebs!

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Lvl 5+ geldings and Brave mares for sale!
Gem
12:17:02 Tier 1 Artist
NEW YHH auction - Stardancer!!
-HEE Click-

Art rumble auction!! Bigsby - T1 winner <3
-HEE Click-

W SD boys for auction - RID and KNN, all disciplines. Some LB or previously LB! Plus some great color to add to your SD lines ^^
-HEE Click-
Elysium Opalus
12:05:12 free palestine
G.0%/G1/short gens
WEEs and KNN
WC Braves
Rare colors
CHEAP sales studs and broods
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Narran Park
12:02:31 Sting
HEE's Photography contest Club!
Come and check out our first contest. Join in if you like!
-HEE Click-
RealTree EQ.
11:32:28 Roan🦋⃤
Looking for more potential members for my club!
- a few roles open.
-HEE Click-

Also starting an auction 9pm EST, ends the 19th at 9pm EST.

My shop is also filled,
15% loyalty discount.
Maps, capture passes, + much more!
Grab what you need while supplies last.
-HEE Click-
Boulder Creek
11:26:29 
Pretty Pony Pageant
August Show:

- Cross Country
- Matchy Matchy
- Working Equitation *
- Get Spotted
~ Flower Festival
~ Beach Ride

Everyone is welcome to join!
Free to Enter!
Win EBs!

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pandemoniu_m
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ViperaVale
10:53:56 Misa
Looking for a Sport Pony Club?
The Sport Pony Collective is pre-launching right now and hosting a EWE Filly giveaway!
-HEE Click-
Goldspur
10:52:01 
LF : SH breeding partners!
CM Elegance
10:49:25 Cassie
Unusual Markings for AA mare x Fillies. Auction starts in 2hrs. priced from 500

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


 ~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


 Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


 ~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

 Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


 ~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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