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Morning Glory Farms
07:28:32 Terici/Dino/Trish
please dont hidden advertise :)
Sweet Valley
07:19:06 Anna/Jewel
Oooo I love the Ice Age movies. Especially the squirrel, Scrat. He makes me laugh a TON
Sunset River Arabian
07:18:19 Athena - AAs
That should keep me distracted for awhile. Thanks
Angels angels
07:17:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The Ice Age movies
Sunset River Arabian
07:16:53 Athena - AAs
Want to pick my movie? I cant decide
Angels angels
07:15:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah and his straws are sold out so unless you can find someone with one they would sell or are able to get an LC good luck lol
I like Basil better too
Sunset River Arabian
07:11:12 Athena - AAs
I think she kind of matches stormrage too but I cant afford 250k on a mare who hasn't had the greatest training and production
Sunset River Arabian
07:10:27 Athena - AAs
Angels
Basil?
Sunset River Arabian
07:10:05 Athena - AAs
I cant decide on a movie. I could either binge all the ice age movies or there's, Rise of the Guardians, The Sea Beast, The Book of Life or The Lorax. Yes those are all kids movies. I need a comfort movie that I know I already love
Angels angels
07:09:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena
I just realized last month lol but he didn't match any of my mares. Luckily I got two embryos I am using him on
Storm Racers
07:07:57 
Hello chat
Sweet Valley
07:05:25 Anna/Jewel
bad link, eve
Golden Crest
07:05:25 | Eve
Just noticed, sorry, hopefully this works lol -HEE Click-
Legacy Leagues
07:05:12 Alyssa ♡
Eve
Its a broken link I think
Golden Crest
07:04:40 | Eve
So happy with this blessing -HEE Click- & no sabino! <3
Cozmic Elite
06:58:10 
-HEE Click-
Anyone who would suit her?
Thinking for for 195 so got time.
Hummingbird Meadows
06:57:12 Bird
@KPH, he definitely looks like he shouldn't be munching on chicken tenders. XD
Sunset River Arabian
06:49:56 Athena - AAs
Funny how I just now realized he existed today lol
Angels angels
06:48:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah true
I think they match really well though. I would do it
Sunset River Arabian
06:47:31 Athena - AAs
mostly because she was still down scp wk5

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Morning Glory Farms
07:28:32 Terici/Dino/Trish
please dont hidden advertise :)
Sweet Valley
07:19:06 Anna/Jewel
Oooo I love the Ice Age movies. Especially the squirrel, Scrat. He makes me laugh a TON
Sunset River Arabian
07:18:19 Athena - AAs
That should keep me distracted for awhile. Thanks
Angels angels
07:17:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The Ice Age movies
Sunset River Arabian
07:16:53 Athena - AAs
Want to pick my movie? I cant decide
Angels angels
07:15:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah and his straws are sold out so unless you can find someone with one they would sell or are able to get an LC good luck lol
I like Basil better too
Sunset River Arabian
07:11:12 Athena - AAs
I think she kind of matches stormrage too but I cant afford 250k on a mare who hasn't had the greatest training and production
Sunset River Arabian
07:10:27 Athena - AAs
Angels
Basil?
Sunset River Arabian
07:10:05 Athena - AAs
I cant decide on a movie. I could either binge all the ice age movies or there's, Rise of the Guardians, The Sea Beast, The Book of Life or The Lorax. Yes those are all kids movies. I need a comfort movie that I know I already love
Angels angels
07:09:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena
I just realized last month lol but he didn't match any of my mares. Luckily I got two embryos I am using him on
Storm Racers
07:07:57 
Hello chat
Sweet Valley
07:05:25 Anna/Jewel
bad link, eve
Golden Crest
07:05:25 | Eve
Just noticed, sorry, hopefully this works lol -HEE Click-
Legacy Leagues
07:05:12 Alyssa ♡
Eve
Its a broken link I think
Golden Crest
07:04:40 | Eve
So happy with this blessing -HEE Click- & no sabino! <3
Cozmic Elite
06:58:10 
-HEE Click-
Anyone who would suit her?
Thinking for for 195 so got time.
Hummingbird Meadows
06:57:12 Bird
@KPH, he definitely looks like he shouldn't be munching on chicken tenders. XD
Sunset River Arabian
06:49:56 Athena - AAs
Funny how I just now realized he existed today lol
Angels angels
06:48:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah true
I think they match really well though. I would do it
Sunset River Arabian
06:47:31 Athena - AAs
mostly because she was still down scp wk5

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Art critique July 3, 2018 04:14 AM

Former Stable
 
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I was looking for someone opinions on my art
I currently charge 8k for a horse avatar do you think that price is right or should I change it

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https://i.imgur.com/KRwOGTn.jpg

I look forward to hearing your suggestions
Art critique July 3, 2018 08:58 AM


WildWillow
 
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Hi Kiralee!

Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.
That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.
However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.

For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!

I hope this helps!
WildWillow
Art critique July 6, 2018 07:17 AM

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WildWillow said:
Hi Kiralee!
Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.
For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!
I hope this helps!WildWillow














Thanks I didn’t redraw the mane/tail as I cannot at the moment Something I am working on

https://i.imgur.com/oHcNVYN.jpg

Here is another example

Edited at July 6, 2018 07:18 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 6, 2018 02:25 PM


WildWillow
 
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Hi again Kirralee!

The mane and tail on your newer piece is very good! If you are able too, on the edges of your mane I would take a blur tool or a smudge tool on a low power and go over the edges a bit. It would help make your mane and tail flow nicely.
Your horse looks a bit small compared to the background. Choosing a background that has a wider area will help your horse fit in well.
I'm unsure if you added the white markings but it looks like you did. I would go over them with a smudge tool to make it look like it is actually part of the coat rather than sitting on top.
Also, the horse's front hoof seems a bit squished. If it had to be cut that way from the stock, I would recommend either redrawing the hoof or taking parts of the other hooves to blend together to form a new one. Also, I would recommend taking a smudge tool and going over the very bottoms of the hooves so they look as though they are truly on the ground.
The last thing I would like to point out is the flower in the mane. The flower is very sharp while the horse is blurred. To fix this, you could either blur the flower or sharpen the horse.

Other than that, I can tell a huge improvement between the previous one and your most recent one!
Art critique July 7, 2018 05:02 AM

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https://i.imgur.com/Bb5U16R.jpg



My first attempt at drawing a mane and tail

Edited at July 7, 2018 06:01 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 7, 2018 06:47 AM

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Definitely better then me I’ll say that right now 😂😂
Art critique July 17, 2018 06:20 AM

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https://s15.postimg.cc/m3duz3gpn/7_AD34_FA6-1_E59-40_FF-_BA15-67938431_DCF1.jpg

First line art

Edited at July 17, 2018 06:20 AM by Kirralee stud farm

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