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WWW SH stallion for auction
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11:32:55 Void Malign

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DragonFyre Estate

11:27:23 Whip

WWW AALB stud for offers. No sabino and no roan on top of being a consistently higher AALB stud. PM me to discuss.
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Dash and Duchess

11:25:05 T1 Artist, W+ seller

Looking for T1 arts for my new filly!!
Please PM me if you'd be interested <3

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WWE appy PON colt for sale. Pm offers

Green River Stables

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EWE AA combo mares auction
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EEW TB mare 40k will lower
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EWW 1/1 mare 500k
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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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