Horse Eden : Critique Please !

12:23:52 Terici/Dino/Trish

My fingers are crossed for you! I hope she's nice to

Valhalla Acreage

12:21:12 Eivor

-HEE Click-
I'm excited for this I'm using a blue glass on this pair

12:17:04 Chey / Star

Trish
I'm very nervous to breed her 😬
I will be svenning her as my first match so hopefully she is nice

12:13:53 Terici/Dino/Trish

I forgot shes 3 next year i cant wait to see how they do

Sunni

12:13:18 Sunni bunny

The match looks really good, and hopefully the cost will be colorful. I am excited for you XD

12:11:59 Chey / Star

Sunni
That's kind of what I was thinking
The match looks solid plus it has the chance for frame and tobi

Sunni

12:09:56 Sunni bunny

Star I think it's worth the gamble

12:08:49 Chey / Star

Do I risk throwing my maiden to a freshie?
-HEE Click-

Sunni

12:07:06 Sunni bunny

Geek if it helps you cope, losing someone is all ways painful.
It takes time to heal, and drawing is a good coping mechanism.
Am sorry for your loss, but I all ways tell myself.
It was an honor to know them, and be their friend.

Transformers Acres

12:04:58 Geek, Eek

I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine

Sunni

12:04:46 Sunni bunny

Cove the sleep is coming for you, haha

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:24 Arctic Katz

Oops I meant Geek

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:12 Arctic Katz

Send me a PM. I am falling asleep, Gerk

Sunni

12:03:18 Sunni bunny

She loved cuddling in my arm, but my hand is numb.

Glacier Bay Cove

12:03:18 Arctic Katz

I feel for you, Geek. What did your puppy look like

Sunni

12:02:54 Sunni bunny

Help I am trapped by a cat.

Moonrose Magic

12:00:43 🎀 Diva

I like the sort of melted caramel brindle look

Moonrose Magic

11:59:28 🎀 Diva

Brindle can't be bred for, breeding 2 brindle together gives like 0.01% more probability or so, otherwise its absolute luck

Dreamcatcher Farms

11:57:56

Chat my fake nails arent coming off help

Checkers Catch

11:55:37

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12:23:52 Terici/Dino/Trish

My fingers are crossed for you! I hope she's nice to

Valhalla Acreage

12:21:12 Eivor

-HEE Click-
I'm excited for this I'm using a blue glass on this pair

12:17:04 Chey / Star

Trish
I'm very nervous to breed her 😬
I will be svenning her as my first match so hopefully she is nice

12:13:53 Terici/Dino/Trish

I forgot shes 3 next year i cant wait to see how they do

Sunni

12:13:18 Sunni bunny

The match looks really good, and hopefully the cost will be colorful. I am excited for you XD

12:11:59 Chey / Star

Sunni
That's kind of what I was thinking
The match looks solid plus it has the chance for frame and tobi

Sunni

12:09:56 Sunni bunny

Star I think it's worth the gamble

12:08:49 Chey / Star

Do I risk throwing my maiden to a freshie?
-HEE Click-

Sunni

12:07:06 Sunni bunny

Transformers Acres

12:04:58 Geek, Eek

I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine

Sunni

12:04:46 Sunni bunny

Cove the sleep is coming for you, haha

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:24 Arctic Katz

Oops I meant Geek

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:12 Arctic Katz

Send me a PM. I am falling asleep, Gerk

Sunni

12:03:18 Sunni bunny

She loved cuddling in my arm, but my hand is numb.

Glacier Bay Cove

12:03:18 Arctic Katz

I feel for you, Geek. What did your puppy look like

Sunni

12:02:54 Sunni bunny

Help I am trapped by a cat.

Moonrose Magic

12:00:43 🎀 Diva

I like the sort of melted caramel brindle look

Moonrose Magic

11:59:28 🎀 Diva

Brindle can't be bred for, breeding 2 brindle together gives like 0.01% more probability or so, otherwise its absolute luck

Dreamcatcher Farms

11:57:56

Chat my fake nails arent coming off help

Checkers Catch

11:55:37

Wish*

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December 19, 2018 10:03 PM

Golden Hall Stables

Posts: 840
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I need help with the tail!

Any suggestions for how I can improve it are wanted!

https://i.postimg.cc/WbdJWz16/Arrogance-s-Pattern-Practice-HEE.jpg

December 19, 2018 10:15 PM

Charmed Acres

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Not a terrible start actually. It just needs more flow, smoothness, and to be darker. It should match the tone and shadows of the horse.

I'd suggest watching youtube videos, finding tutorials on DA, or just practicing until you find something that works for you.

December 20, 2018 06:02 AM

Former Stable

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Edited at December 20, 2018 07:06 AM by The Noisy Fam.

December 20, 2018 10:18 AM

Sunset Grove Farm

Posts: 7336
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The horse it's self is amazing but I'm agreeing with charms point on the tail

As well as thst I suggest blurring some of the backeound ;)