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Birthday Girl

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I'm ready for a 3 month upgrade

Eagles Peak

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Join new SH focused club: -HEE Click-
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Massbay

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ISO of upgrade. willing to pay for 1, 3, or 6 month.

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:26:12 TB'S / T3 Artist

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Gem

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Boulder Creek

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Beach Ride
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Eivors Warmbloods

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Sunni

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EWE Combos
EEE Mares
SD W Jumping stallions
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194 Maiden WWW SH first and second embryos for auction! Check this forum out for more info!

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Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 10:53 AM

Former Stable

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So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737</a>

(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613</a>

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034</a>

(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 12:25 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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Red Dragon said:
So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737
(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034
(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

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