Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Glacier Bay Cove
11:08:02 Arctic Katz
Nice
Ivory Coast
11:03:39 
What do we think about my barn? -HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
10:51:45 Lily
You can check how much you're earning by clicking on the arena that is hosting the show (before the show ends of course)
Alpine Acres
10:49:21 Lily
Potatoes
yes, you do earn a small profit from hosting shows. It depends on how high you set the show entry fees
Hummingbird Meadows
10:37:33 Bird
I kind of wish we could sell the rerolls we get from the game. I am sitting on way to many and won't be using them soon.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:36:05 Arctic Katz
I posted the link for people to join in playing HEE, but I don't think any of them did
Wild_Potatoes
10:22:30 
Or ignore me. That works to.
Wild_Potatoes
10:15:38 
Do you win anything from hosting shows?
KPH Equestrian
10:14:17 Rapcoon | Jester
thank you arctic and fog<3<3
Sunset River Arabian
10:10:11 Athena - AAs
Just noticed I had identical bravery fillies. Kind of glad only one was W though
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Sunset River Arabian
10:06:42 Athena - AAs
Thanks! It's one of Trish's OCs
Glacier Bay Cove
10:06:25 Arctic Katz
Those both look absolutely amazing
@Rapcoon
@Athena
Sundance
10:06:01 Sun/Sunny/Rose
Athena WOW that is gorge
Sunset River Arabian
10:04:46 Athena - AAs
I forgot I made this lol
-Click-
Foggy Mtn PONs
10:03:06 Fog
Looks awesome, Jester!
KPH Equestrian
10:02:25 Rapcoon | Jester
I wasn't too sure at first, but I kinda love it so far >>
-Click-
Foggy Mtn PONs
09:54:00 Fog
Thank you Snitch, I love silver too! <3
Snitches' Stitches
09:51:10 Snitch
Love silver horses fog. So pretty❤️
Foggy Mtn PONs
09:50:22 Fog
Still so in love with this filly, cannot believe she is real -HEE Click- <3
ShiningStar Stables
09:50:11 Chey / Star
Snitch
Honestly, that's what I do most times xD

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Glacier Bay Cove
11:08:02 Arctic Katz
Nice
Ivory Coast
11:03:39 
What do we think about my barn? -HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
10:51:45 Lily
You can check how much you're earning by clicking on the arena that is hosting the show (before the show ends of course)
Alpine Acres
10:49:21 Lily
Potatoes
yes, you do earn a small profit from hosting shows. It depends on how high you set the show entry fees
Hummingbird Meadows
10:37:33 Bird
I kind of wish we could sell the rerolls we get from the game. I am sitting on way to many and won't be using them soon.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:36:05 Arctic Katz
I posted the link for people to join in playing HEE, but I don't think any of them did
Wild_Potatoes
10:22:30 
Or ignore me. That works to.
Wild_Potatoes
10:15:38 
Do you win anything from hosting shows?
KPH Equestrian
10:14:17 Rapcoon | Jester
thank you arctic and fog<3<3
Sunset River Arabian
10:10:11 Athena - AAs
Just noticed I had identical bravery fillies. Kind of glad only one was W though
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Sunset River Arabian
10:06:42 Athena - AAs
Thanks! It's one of Trish's OCs
Glacier Bay Cove
10:06:25 Arctic Katz
Those both look absolutely amazing
@Rapcoon
@Athena
Sundance
10:06:01 Sun/Sunny/Rose
Athena WOW that is gorge
Sunset River Arabian
10:04:46 Athena - AAs
I forgot I made this lol
-Click-
Foggy Mtn PONs
10:03:06 Fog
Looks awesome, Jester!
KPH Equestrian
10:02:25 Rapcoon | Jester
I wasn't too sure at first, but I kinda love it so far >>
-Click-
Foggy Mtn PONs
09:54:00 Fog
Thank you Snitch, I love silver too! <3
Snitches' Stitches
09:51:10 Snitch
Love silver horses fog. So pretty❤️
Foggy Mtn PONs
09:50:22 Fog
Still so in love with this filly, cannot believe she is real -HEE Click- <3
ShiningStar Stables
09:50:11 Chey / Star
Snitch
Honestly, that's what I do most times xD

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Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:24 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zt8M.jpg

I've been working on an updated art style for about two weeks now and I'd love some critiques on my first stage of progress with this. Please no negativity, I'd just love some suggestions and critique on this piece so I can improve :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:29 AM


Flipperruby30
 
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It looks amazing!!Try perhaps editing the top of the landscape behind but other wise Well Done!
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:47 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:53 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)



Thank you! This helps a lot.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:45 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:49 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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VellaDun Manor said:
Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)



Thank you! I've been thinking about trying to paint manes but they never come out how I'd like, no matter how many tutorials I look at xD I'll try that though as well as the lighting. There is a vignette on there, it's light though.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:53 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Mhmm, haha =)

I actually have struggled sooo much with hair, lol, and all the DA tutorials made it look super easy and then mine came out as crap xD So I honestly just played around myself until I finally found something that looked decent and had some potential if I refined the style a bit and such... but yea, feel free to PM me if you need any help with stuff like pesky hair x)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:56 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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I will :P I've got a tablet, but my stupid hand doesn't like drawing xD
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:06 PM

Former Stable
 
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It looks wonderful but the glow around the horse could be slightly less intense and the horse seems a little too smudged but I love it! Looks amazing
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:08 PM


Casanova
 
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It looks great! Only thing I would look into is manes (As mentioned above) But I love the strong glow around the horse! It's personally a style I really like.

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