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Wolf Dancer
10:59:11 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Win
Yes it hurt horribly I had it twisted for about 5 days before hospital, long story short a bad sickness was going around so the first couple of days I assumed the vomiting/sickness was that until the cramps and immobility started happening, then day 5 I went to the hospital was immediately seen 5 hours later at 11 got a CT scan and they saw it was twisted, and a third of it had gone septic, so they had to do emergency surgery at like midnight >.>
Winter Curtain
10:58:27 Win | Water
Bird, i'm sure your ok. :3
Winter Curtain
10:57:59 Win | Water
Sunni, agreed.
Hummingbird Meadows
10:57:43 Bird
I'm honestly just tired of people in my life telling me I should just try running or this diet to "fix" my chronic conditions.
Winter Curtain
10:57:30 Win | Water
Wolf.

Without you knowing? Didn't it hurt?

Peggy.

I had plans on going to another country to show in september, but i cancelled everything cuz of the broken ankle..
Glacier Bay Cove
10:57:17 Arctic Katz
Mood, Sunni
Glacier Bay Cove
10:56:59 Arctic Katz
Sucks
Sunni
10:56:58 Sunni bunny
Real life is being kicked over and over and getting up with a thumbs up XD.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:55:56 Arctic Katz
Real Life
Pegasus Lane
10:54:55 Peggy (or) Peg
Ohhh I also have POTS!

Aww Win 😫
I was supposed to move a few weeks after I tore my tendon but wasn't worth paying rent if I wasn't going to be training lmao
Wolf Dancer
10:54:54 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Win
Oof I'm sorry your in the hospital so often >.< I had to go in the spring, my colon twisted without us knowing and they had to do massive surgery and I would be quite happy to never have to go again >.>
MakeEm Fancy
10:54:53 Ally 💜
Yeah but cant afford to be off my knee for weeks with my kids and animals. Maybe in a year or so I can do it
Winter Curtain
10:54:40 Win | Water
Why is everyone suffering here.
Wolf Dancer
10:53:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Peggy
Oof that's rough >.>
Sunni
10:53:36 Sunni bunny
Angel I gotta have all my teeth removed one day.
5 are baby teeth, 2 or missing luckily no one can see them.
I brush my teeth daily too and still they are just bad.

Ally ouch, I know that adds pressure within the knee.
Blue Sky Equestrian
10:53:28 Aris/Quinn
I have POTS
Winter Curtain
10:53:27 Win | Water
Peggy, i get that. Also had big plans for the rest of the year...
Pegasus Lane
10:53:27 Peggy (or) Peg
I have lyme... so I was training 4-6 hours a day on top of classes and then going home and spending another 3 hours on animal chores. Was/is rough when it's in full swing 🙃
MakeEm Fancy
10:53:09 Ally 💜
I have chronic headaches. Its not fun
Wolf Dancer
10:53:07 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Peggy
Ohh that's such a awesome sport! I admire you for being able to do that! lol I do XC and Pole Vault primarily and a few other events and sports besides those lol

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Wolf Dancer
10:59:11 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Win
Yes it hurt horribly I had it twisted for about 5 days before hospital, long story short a bad sickness was going around so the first couple of days I assumed the vomiting/sickness was that until the cramps and immobility started happening, then day 5 I went to the hospital was immediately seen 5 hours later at 11 got a CT scan and they saw it was twisted, and a third of it had gone septic, so they had to do emergency surgery at like midnight >.>
Winter Curtain
10:58:27 Win | Water
Bird, i'm sure your ok. :3
Winter Curtain
10:57:59 Win | Water
Sunni, agreed.
Hummingbird Meadows
10:57:43 Bird
I'm honestly just tired of people in my life telling me I should just try running or this diet to "fix" my chronic conditions.
Winter Curtain
10:57:30 Win | Water
Wolf.

Without you knowing? Didn't it hurt?

Peggy.

I had plans on going to another country to show in september, but i cancelled everything cuz of the broken ankle..
Glacier Bay Cove
10:57:17 Arctic Katz
Mood, Sunni
Glacier Bay Cove
10:56:59 Arctic Katz
Sucks
Sunni
10:56:58 Sunni bunny
Real life is being kicked over and over and getting up with a thumbs up XD.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:55:56 Arctic Katz
Real Life
Pegasus Lane
10:54:55 Peggy (or) Peg
Ohhh I also have POTS!

Aww Win 😫
I was supposed to move a few weeks after I tore my tendon but wasn't worth paying rent if I wasn't going to be training lmao
Wolf Dancer
10:54:54 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Win
Oof I'm sorry your in the hospital so often >.< I had to go in the spring, my colon twisted without us knowing and they had to do massive surgery and I would be quite happy to never have to go again >.>
MakeEm Fancy
10:54:53 Ally 💜
Yeah but cant afford to be off my knee for weeks with my kids and animals. Maybe in a year or so I can do it
Winter Curtain
10:54:40 Win | Water
Why is everyone suffering here.
Wolf Dancer
10:53:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Peggy
Oof that's rough >.>
Sunni
10:53:36 Sunni bunny
Angel I gotta have all my teeth removed one day.
5 are baby teeth, 2 or missing luckily no one can see them.
I brush my teeth daily too and still they are just bad.

Ally ouch, I know that adds pressure within the knee.
Blue Sky Equestrian
10:53:28 Aris/Quinn
I have POTS
Winter Curtain
10:53:27 Win | Water
Peggy, i get that. Also had big plans for the rest of the year...
Pegasus Lane
10:53:27 Peggy (or) Peg
I have lyme... so I was training 4-6 hours a day on top of classes and then going home and spending another 3 hours on animal chores. Was/is rough when it's in full swing 🙃
MakeEm Fancy
10:53:09 Ally 💜
I have chronic headaches. Its not fun
Wolf Dancer
10:53:07 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Peggy
Ohh that's such a awesome sport! I admire you for being able to do that! lol I do XC and Pole Vault primarily and a few other events and sports besides those lol

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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