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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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12:45:44

I like Carmel drip a lot, or even sugar cane.

12:41:20

Sherpa map in raid

12:41:08 Fantasy | Fanta

A few days after I get that 100 stall barn I need another :')

12:39:42 Lily/Alpine

or 'Caramel Cane' after her sire? She's gorgeous :)

12:39:06

-HEE Click-

I can't get over this filly's coat, I don't know what to name her.
"Caramel drip?"

Rising Stars Stable

12:31:55 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Dun horse in raid

God is Mighty Stable

12:29:30 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
He's going to Angel as well

12:28:12 Fantasy | Fanta

-HEE Click-
If her bravery is bad she's going to Angel lol

12:26:41

I can't stop gushing about how pretty she is
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

12:26:16 Arctic Katz

I like it, Fern

12:26:11 Lily/Alpine

Thank you! <3

BluebonnetCreekRanch

12:25:47 BluebonnetBree

There ya go @Lily :)

12:24:40 Lily/Alpine

I have the raid quest, anyone want to help me with it? :)

God is Mighty Stable

12:23:11 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Hey, Trish
How are you doing?

RFS Thoroughbreds

12:23:11 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

kind've like this for the beehive idea
-Click-

Morning Glory Farms

12:21:58 Terici/Dino/Trish

No chatspeak please Blue Bonnet :) make sure youre spelling out your words

Rising Stars Stable

12:18:45 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
If only he could of been a LpLp as well

BluebonnetCreekRanch

12:12:52 BluebonnetBree

Ty! <3

God is Mighty Stable

12:10:46 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Blue
yes! He couldn't be homo fer anything besides Ch

God is Mighty Stable

12:09:51 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
Hello my pretty

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12:45:44

I like Carmel drip a lot, or even sugar cane.

12:41:20

Sherpa map in raid

12:41:08 Fantasy | Fanta

A few days after I get that 100 stall barn I need another :')

12:39:42 Lily/Alpine

or 'Caramel Cane' after her sire? She's gorgeous :)

12:39:06

-HEE Click-

I can't get over this filly's coat, I don't know what to name her.
"Caramel drip?"

Rising Stars Stable

12:31:55 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Dun horse in raid

God is Mighty Stable

12:29:30 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
He's going to Angel as well

12:28:12 Fantasy | Fanta

-HEE Click-
If her bravery is bad she's going to Angel lol

12:26:41

I can't stop gushing about how pretty she is
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

12:26:16 Arctic Katz

I like it, Fern

12:26:11 Lily/Alpine

Thank you! <3

BluebonnetCreekRanch

12:25:47 BluebonnetBree

There ya go @Lily :)

12:24:40 Lily/Alpine

I have the raid quest, anyone want to help me with it? :)

God is Mighty Stable

12:23:11 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Hey, Trish
How are you doing?

RFS Thoroughbreds

12:23:11 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

kind've like this for the beehive idea
-Click-

Morning Glory Farms

12:21:58 Terici/Dino/Trish

No chatspeak please Blue Bonnet :) make sure youre spelling out your words

Rising Stars Stable

12:18:45 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
If only he could of been a LpLp as well

BluebonnetCreekRanch

12:12:52 BluebonnetBree

Ty! <3

God is Mighty Stable

12:10:46 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Blue
yes! He couldn't be homo fer anything besides Ch

God is Mighty Stable

12:09:51 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
Hello my pretty

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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