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07:40:31 Versa

I mean, tiels aren't too noisy. They rarely scream. It's Icarus mostly

07:37:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

oh dear. must be loud

07:35:51 Versa

Ivy,
Currently riled up, got a bunch of thunderstorm and flood warnings. They're not pleased with the thunder lol

Hummingbird Meadows

07:34:21 Bird

Honestly his favorite toy is a pool noodle. XD

07:33:16 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

how are the birds?

07:32:57 Versa

Hi Ivy :)

Hummingbird Meadows

07:32:54 Bird

He does like the laser. I want to take him outside, but it's been so hot.

07:32:43 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa!

07:32:22 Versa

Oh god, just make sure it's not rechargeable

Glacier Bay Cove

07:31:49 Arctic Katz

How about a battery operated laser pointer, would he like that

Hummingbird Meadows

07:30:40 Bird

@Glacier, no. I try to use a teaser wand and play with him, but he's not super interested

Glacier Bay Cove

07:29:16 Arctic Katz

Does he have any interactive toys

Insignia Elites

07:25:19 Em

First time I breed a brindle and I don't have the quest xD -HEE Click-

Hummingbird Meadows

07:23:25 Bird

Anyone have tips on entertaining a bored cat?

07:16:46 Ivy / poison ivy

but i have people on

07:15:04 Ivy / poison ivy

i wish my trio was on 😔

07:14:39 Ivy / poison ivy

hi

Glacier Bay Cove

07:10:11 Arctic Katz

Card view is AWESOME

07:10:07 noli,SH thief,bread

The heart!
-HEE Click-

07:04:25 Tano

-HEE Click-

or this black chestnut brindle is really cool

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07:40:31 Versa

I mean, tiels aren't too noisy. They rarely scream. It's Icarus mostly

07:37:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

oh dear. must be loud

07:35:51 Versa

Ivy,
Currently riled up, got a bunch of thunderstorm and flood warnings. They're not pleased with the thunder lol

Hummingbird Meadows

07:34:21 Bird

Honestly his favorite toy is a pool noodle. XD

07:33:16 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

how are the birds?

07:32:57 Versa

Hi Ivy :)

Hummingbird Meadows

07:32:54 Bird

He does like the laser. I want to take him outside, but it's been so hot.

07:32:43 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa!

07:32:22 Versa

Oh god, just make sure it's not rechargeable

Glacier Bay Cove

07:31:49 Arctic Katz

How about a battery operated laser pointer, would he like that

Hummingbird Meadows

07:30:40 Bird

@Glacier, no. I try to use a teaser wand and play with him, but he's not super interested

Glacier Bay Cove

07:29:16 Arctic Katz

Does he have any interactive toys

Insignia Elites

07:25:19 Em

First time I breed a brindle and I don't have the quest xD -HEE Click-

Hummingbird Meadows

07:23:25 Bird

Anyone have tips on entertaining a bored cat?

07:16:46 Ivy / poison ivy

but i have people on

07:15:04 Ivy / poison ivy

i wish my trio was on 😔

07:14:39 Ivy / poison ivy

hi

Glacier Bay Cove

07:10:11 Arctic Katz

Card view is AWESOME

07:10:07 noli,SH thief,bread

The heart!
-HEE Click-

07:04:25 Tano

-HEE Click-

or this black chestnut brindle is really cool

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March 11, 2018 09:35 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png

So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.

However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.

Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P

March 11, 2018 10:57 PM

Hallucination Manor

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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D

March 11, 2018 11:10 PM

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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.

March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)

It looks amazing, what a great start. <3

March 11, 2018 11:36 PM

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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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