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It's A Cinch
08:38:31 Sasha - Sash
ok thank you guys! :)
Dash and Duchess
08:38:05 DD | ~Squizard~
*your xD
Dash and Duchess
08:37:50 DD | ~Squizard~
Sash, asking people to breed to you're horses does go in sales :)
Looking Glass Stable
08:37:46 IA Glass 👋
Oh lol. Yes, advertisements for a horse for breeding would go in Sales then
It's A Cinch
08:36:57 Sasha - Sash
ok so i wanted to ask since i have no more mares if anyone would want to breed a palomino warmblood stallion?
Looking Glass Stable
08:36:39 IA Glass 👋
*or Chch for yes also lol
LBKL
08:36:36 
Okay thanks!
Looking Glass Stable
08:36:16 IA Glass 👋
@LBKL
They're ChCh for yes, chch for no
Dash and Duchess
08:36:14 DD | ~Squizard~
Sash, if it's two you're breeding and you want advice, then it's ok to put here, just be sure to use the matchmaker as to not link horses for breeding :)
Looking Glass Stable
08:36:00 IA Glass 👋
You can ask here Sasha. Whats your question?
LBKL
08:35:39 
What's the genetics for a Champagne horse?
It's A Cinch
08:32:57 Sasha - Sash
would questioning about breeding horses be in sales chat or on this chat?
It's A Cinch
08:31:37 Sasha - Sash
Very nice Em!
Glacier Bay Cove
08:30:42 Arctic Katz
Congratulations, Em
Insignia Elites
08:29:05 Em
Never had a horse be number one :D -HEE Click-
It's A Cinch
08:26:06 Sasha - Sash
no worries tobi
Tobiano Lady
08:24:22 Tobi | Nix
oh i'm so sorry, wrong chat ;.;
Tobiano Lady
08:24:01 Tobi | Nix
-HEE Click-
2upWK3 WC SD XC PON stud up for breeding! Homo tobi, creme and dun; 8/12 WC babies so far and only 1k!
Dash and Duchess
08:21:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, That's awful!! And the sheer gall to go 4/6 is painful >.>
At least she went AU! the bland sucks, but maybe she'll be a good producer?

Thankfully things went pretty good here!
-HEE Click-

Versailles
08:20:42 Versa
I rerolled her into one that wasn't spraypaint because I don't like spraypaint sabino lol

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It's A Cinch
08:38:31 Sasha - Sash
ok thank you guys! :)
Dash and Duchess
08:38:05 DD | ~Squizard~
*your xD
Dash and Duchess
08:37:50 DD | ~Squizard~
Sash, asking people to breed to you're horses does go in sales :)
Looking Glass Stable
08:37:46 IA Glass 👋
Oh lol. Yes, advertisements for a horse for breeding would go in Sales then
It's A Cinch
08:36:57 Sasha - Sash
ok so i wanted to ask since i have no more mares if anyone would want to breed a palomino warmblood stallion?
Looking Glass Stable
08:36:39 IA Glass 👋
*or Chch for yes also lol
LBKL
08:36:36 
Okay thanks!
Looking Glass Stable
08:36:16 IA Glass 👋
@LBKL
They're ChCh for yes, chch for no
Dash and Duchess
08:36:14 DD | ~Squizard~
Sash, if it's two you're breeding and you want advice, then it's ok to put here, just be sure to use the matchmaker as to not link horses for breeding :)
Looking Glass Stable
08:36:00 IA Glass 👋
You can ask here Sasha. Whats your question?
LBKL
08:35:39 
What's the genetics for a Champagne horse?
It's A Cinch
08:32:57 Sasha - Sash
would questioning about breeding horses be in sales chat or on this chat?
It's A Cinch
08:31:37 Sasha - Sash
Very nice Em!
Glacier Bay Cove
08:30:42 Arctic Katz
Congratulations, Em
Insignia Elites
08:29:05 Em
Never had a horse be number one :D -HEE Click-
It's A Cinch
08:26:06 Sasha - Sash
no worries tobi
Tobiano Lady
08:24:22 Tobi | Nix
oh i'm so sorry, wrong chat ;.;
Tobiano Lady
08:24:01 Tobi | Nix
-HEE Click-
2upWK3 WC SD XC PON stud up for breeding! Homo tobi, creme and dun; 8/12 WC babies so far and only 1k!
Dash and Duchess
08:21:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, That's awful!! And the sheer gall to go 4/6 is painful >.>
At least she went AU! the bland sucks, but maybe she'll be a good producer?

Thankfully things went pretty good here!
-HEE Click-

Versailles
08:20:42 Versa
I rerolled her into one that wasn't spraypaint because I don't like spraypaint sabino lol

-HEE Click-

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Art criticism January 13, 2024 02:57 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Please offer me advice! Working on ibis paint with an iPad and stylus
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Edited at January 13, 2024 02:59 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 02:55 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Still looking for advice + pricing suggestions. Thank you :)
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:07 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Doubt post sorry!

Edited at January 16, 2024 03:30 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:16 PM


Amethyst Ranch
 
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I'd definitely say you could be in low tier 1 :) The hair in piece 1 and 3 is amazing <3
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:22 PM


The Unknown
 
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The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.

Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:24 PM


Sweetwater Creek
 
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I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:31 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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The Unknown said:

The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.



I repaint the whole horse depending if I like the face or not lol.
I would love shadow advice - I can never place them right I think I just don't understand light xD
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:32 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Sweetwater Creek said:
I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!


Awesome thanks a million! I really neglect the bodies of my horses which is totally my bad
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:38 PM


Zomb
 
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I personally would say high T2. I love the feel of them! But as stated above, the shadowing feels off for me. I like the lighting on the horse, some soft shadows would define them even more (if you haven't already). Along side the lack of definition in the body with muscles etc etc. but that's easily fixable with a chalk pen + a soft light layer (one for light another for shadows). I think if you could work on those two (happy to help where I can) you definitely would be T1 without a doubt :)
Art criticism March 31, 2024 02:21 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Really interested for critique and thought on this:

Based on this forum I tried to focus on muscling through the body. I hope I've improved a bit.

Edited at June 2, 2024 07:37 AM by Enoki Valley

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