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Mustang Willows
08:47:53 Charlie
My Standardbred has a shark fin so I know the feeling
Orussid
08:45:46 
no, riding bareback in general hurts because of the shark fins
The Seven Sins
08:44:44 Seven
I should get up for work and get ready. I'm so tired today though 😫
Quail Run Creek
08:43:46 Quail
None of the horses I entered into federations yesterday have the mark next to their name? But when I go to the feds page there's the option to remove them
Mustang Willows
08:43:40 Charlie
Yes I prefer that too Although when I am not in pain I notice it, but when I am I don’t. Lol. Growing up I did not have a choice, we did not own saddles
MakeEm Fancy
08:43:20 Ally 💜
Thank you! Seven
Telepath
08:42:55 Tele
-HEE Click-

Hes pretty .-,
The Seven Sins
08:42:33 Seven
Yay! Congrats, Ally! <3
Vahana Hollow
08:41:44 Val
Thank you all xD
Quail Run Creek
08:40:05 Quail
Val I am not even close to having the amount of ebs for any of the insane work you do, but I literally stalk every single thing you put out there. You're so talented!
All Breeds
08:39:28 Fawn
Ugh I'm so jealous of the pretty art Val 😍
Orussid
08:38:29 
I prefer not to be in pain when I ride
Mustang Willows
08:38:28 Charlie
Beautiful art
Vahana Hollow
08:37:54 Val
Sorry guys - I was in the process of Alt + Tabbing all my art stuff open, ahahaha. I was talking about the girl, who is actually indeed my stable page, LOL.
-HEE Click-
Mustang Willows
08:37:34 Charlie
Yes. I know the feeling. I love bareback, because that how I grew up riding.
Orussid
08:35:28 
never liked riding bareback, but all my horses have been shark fins
Mustang Willows
08:31:12 Charlie
Sounds fun Centura. Next is a canter bareback. Personally it’s easier than trotting bareback
MakeEm Fancy
08:29:20 Ally 💜
My freshie is at #9 ABLB 🥹
*Stable of Jewels*
08:27:16 Jewelbug🍄
Ah those RO where you blew through all your money and have some regrets but some not regrets too...those are the days xD
Centura stable
08:24:43 Centura
still buzzing from having my first ever no stirrup canter!

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Mustang Willows
08:47:53 Charlie
My Standardbred has a shark fin so I know the feeling
Orussid
08:45:46 
no, riding bareback in general hurts because of the shark fins
The Seven Sins
08:44:44 Seven
I should get up for work and get ready. I'm so tired today though 😫
Quail Run Creek
08:43:46 Quail
None of the horses I entered into federations yesterday have the mark next to their name? But when I go to the feds page there's the option to remove them
Mustang Willows
08:43:40 Charlie
Yes I prefer that too Although when I am not in pain I notice it, but when I am I don’t. Lol. Growing up I did not have a choice, we did not own saddles
MakeEm Fancy
08:43:20 Ally 💜
Thank you! Seven
Telepath
08:42:55 Tele
-HEE Click-

Hes pretty .-,
The Seven Sins
08:42:33 Seven
Yay! Congrats, Ally! <3
Vahana Hollow
08:41:44 Val
Thank you all xD
Quail Run Creek
08:40:05 Quail
Val I am not even close to having the amount of ebs for any of the insane work you do, but I literally stalk every single thing you put out there. You're so talented!
All Breeds
08:39:28 Fawn
Ugh I'm so jealous of the pretty art Val 😍
Orussid
08:38:29 
I prefer not to be in pain when I ride
Mustang Willows
08:38:28 Charlie
Beautiful art
Vahana Hollow
08:37:54 Val
Sorry guys - I was in the process of Alt + Tabbing all my art stuff open, ahahaha. I was talking about the girl, who is actually indeed my stable page, LOL.
-HEE Click-
Mustang Willows
08:37:34 Charlie
Yes. I know the feeling. I love bareback, because that how I grew up riding.
Orussid
08:35:28 
never liked riding bareback, but all my horses have been shark fins
Mustang Willows
08:31:12 Charlie
Sounds fun Centura. Next is a canter bareback. Personally it’s easier than trotting bareback
MakeEm Fancy
08:29:20 Ally 💜
My freshie is at #9 ABLB 🥹
*Stable of Jewels*
08:27:16 Jewelbug🍄
Ah those RO where you blew through all your money and have some regrets but some not regrets too...those are the days xD
Centura stable
08:24:43 Centura
still buzzing from having my first ever no stirrup canter!

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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