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Pink Mocha
10:44:56 Pinky 🎀
Oh no Phan
Glacier Bay Farms
10:43:09 Arctic Cove Katz
Never mind, she has already been named
Glacier Bay Farms
10:42:23 Arctic Cove Katz
@Silent Moon
Glacier Bay Farms
10:41:58 Arctic Cove Katz
Winter Warrior Queen
Arabes d'Arnac
10:40:29 Phan
I'm so mad I didn't put a breeding requirement on my freshie. A bunch of PPP mares got put to him...
Rose Trails Barn
10:34:24 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thank you moon
Silent Moon
10:33:23 
Echo
That sounds good
Tema Farms
10:32:20 Tema
How`s this for an idea? Stable Subscription/ Auction Alert
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Rose Trails Barn
10:30:58 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Plastered
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Maybe plastere0 cement?
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:17 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Shes cute..
Silent Moon
10:29:03 
Morning chat, if it is morning.. Should I rename her?
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Rose Trails Barn
10:26:50 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I was specifically looking for a good color that would go with him because I can't make up my mind.
Rose Trails Barn
10:26:00 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Nemi
Alright
xA Million Thoughts
10:25:14 ⚜️.MT.
I know she was a 1-4 but I think she looks better without the varnish.
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Motonemi
10:23:16 AL, mum to Nemi
Echo, if you want colourful foals from him you should pair him with mares that are genetested and have multiple genes they have 2 copies of
Nippy Equine
10:22:51 Nippy/Nipple
Oooh. hows his personality?
Greenheart Stables
10:22:35 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Nippy
Enchi Desert Ghost
Telepath
10:22:12 Tele
Echo
If you want a colorful horse, any horse with tons of genetics would be good
Rose Trails Barn
10:22:09 Echo/ Eco Friendly
A lot*

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Pink Mocha
10:44:56 Pinky 🎀
Oh no Phan
Glacier Bay Farms
10:43:09 Arctic Cove Katz
Never mind, she has already been named
Glacier Bay Farms
10:42:23 Arctic Cove Katz
@Silent Moon
Glacier Bay Farms
10:41:58 Arctic Cove Katz
Winter Warrior Queen
Arabes d'Arnac
10:40:29 Phan
I'm so mad I didn't put a breeding requirement on my freshie. A bunch of PPP mares got put to him...
Rose Trails Barn
10:34:24 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thank you moon
Silent Moon
10:33:23 
Echo
That sounds good
Tema Farms
10:32:20 Tema
How`s this for an idea? Stable Subscription/ Auction Alert
-HEE Click-
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:58 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Plastered
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Maybe plastere0 cement?
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:17 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Shes cute..
Silent Moon
10:29:03 
Morning chat, if it is morning.. Should I rename her?
-HEE Click-
Rose Trails Barn
10:26:50 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I was specifically looking for a good color that would go with him because I can't make up my mind.
Rose Trails Barn
10:26:00 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Nemi
Alright
xA Million Thoughts
10:25:14 ⚜️.MT.
I know she was a 1-4 but I think she looks better without the varnish.
-HEE Click-
Motonemi
10:23:16 AL, mum to Nemi
Echo, if you want colourful foals from him you should pair him with mares that are genetested and have multiple genes they have 2 copies of
Nippy Equine
10:22:51 Nippy/Nipple
Oooh. hows his personality?
Greenheart Stables
10:22:35 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Nippy
Enchi Desert Ghost
Telepath
10:22:12 Tele
Echo
If you want a colorful horse, any horse with tons of genetics would be good
Rose Trails Barn
10:22:09 Echo/ Eco Friendly
A lot*

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Critique Please August 20, 2019 08:00 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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New ones
https://i.postimg.cc/HxjZHKVz/DE56-D190-08-A0-459-B-977-F-E5-D27-C1-C0-C66.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/3R6LwBGT/231-C5429-2621-4-CED-AC53-E77-B38177-F15.jpg

Edited at August 20, 2019 08:00 PM by Raindrop Ridge
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:17 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Even more new ones
https://i.postimg.cc/sxx0vNS6/5411-CEE4-683-F-417-A-9-A35-598054-E49822.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/P5YVpZpj/726-A30-D0-E880-4-A35-B648-BE557-EB5077-C.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/zv4p3Xqv/B1-DC0-AD1-E38-B-40-C4-BDB8-2-D4-F5-BD602-EC.jpg
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:35 PM


Aussie Wattles
 
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They look a lot better!
They do still look kinda like a blob on the ground though. Thing about where the lights coming from and the shape of the horse. Looking at RL photos as well as others art can help give you an idea of where shadows should be. Make sure your edges are nice and soft. The hardness and the darkness/lightness of a shadow will vary between pieces.
Overall it just takes a lot of practice.

What device do you use for your art?
Critique Please September 1, 2019 02:02 AM

Former Stable
 
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Hey Raindrop!

My best critique would be to work on realistic shadowing, like others have suggested. Your shadows are off to a great start! They are just too dark and too shapeless at the moment.

These DA tutorials might help!

https://www.deviantart.com/lady-entice/art/Shadow-tutorial-186362600

https://www.deviantart.com/xxsanuk/art/shadow-tutorial-for-GIMP-173291036


I would also make sure that your subject and background are well matched (size-wise). The second horse (the bay on the wood pier) stands out the most for me. He is pretty tiny, compared to the wood planks. :)

Otherwise, you do a pretty good job of finding stock with decent matching lighting/coloration to your backgrounds. Keep practicing! So many things come from just trying new things. <3 You are on your way.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 10:05 AM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Thanks Trigg and Aussie, IÂ’ll try that next time, I think itÂ’ll really help.
Aussie, I use my iPad, but sometimes my Computer.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 07:06 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Any pricing help would be nice too.

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