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10:44:56 Pinky 🎀

Oh no Phan

Glacier Bay Farms

10:43:09 Arctic Cove Katz

Never mind, she has already been named

Glacier Bay Farms

10:42:23 Arctic Cove Katz

@Silent Moon

Glacier Bay Farms

10:41:58 Arctic Cove Katz

Winter Warrior Queen

10:40:29 Phan

I'm so mad I didn't put a breeding requirement on my freshie. A bunch of PPP mares got put to him...

Rose Trails Barn

10:34:24 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Thank you moon

10:33:23

Echo
That sounds good

10:32:20 Tema

How`s this for an idea? Stable Subscription/ Auction Alert
-HEE Click-

Rose Trails Barn

10:30:58 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Plastered

Rose Trails Barn

10:30:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Maybe plastere0 cement?

Rose Trails Barn

10:30:17 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Shes cute..

10:29:03

Morning chat, if it is morning.. Should I rename her?
-HEE Click-

Rose Trails Barn

10:26:50 Echo/ Eco Friendly

I was specifically looking for a good color that would go with him because I can't make up my mind.

Rose Trails Barn

10:26:00 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Nemi
Alright

xA Million Thoughts

10:25:14 ⚜️.MT.

I know she was a 1-4 but I think she looks better without the varnish.
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10:23:16 AL, mum to Nemi

Echo, if you want colourful foals from him you should pair him with mares that are genetested and have multiple genes they have 2 copies of

10:22:51 Nippy/Nipple

Oooh. hows his personality?

Greenheart Stables

10:22:35 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Nippy
Enchi Desert Ghost

10:22:12 Tele

Echo
If you want a colorful horse, any horse with tons of genetics would be good

Rose Trails Barn

10:22:09 Echo/ Eco Friendly

A lot*

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10:44:56 Pinky 🎀

Oh no Phan

Glacier Bay Farms

10:43:09 Arctic Cove Katz

Never mind, she has already been named

Glacier Bay Farms

10:42:23 Arctic Cove Katz

@Silent Moon

Glacier Bay Farms

10:41:58 Arctic Cove Katz

Winter Warrior Queen

10:40:29 Phan

I'm so mad I didn't put a breeding requirement on my freshie. A bunch of PPP mares got put to him...

Rose Trails Barn

10:34:24 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Thank you moon

10:33:23

Echo
That sounds good

10:32:20 Tema

How`s this for an idea? Stable Subscription/ Auction Alert
-HEE Click-

Rose Trails Barn

10:30:58 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Plastered

Rose Trails Barn

10:30:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Maybe plastere0 cement?

Rose Trails Barn

10:30:17 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Shes cute..

10:29:03

Morning chat, if it is morning.. Should I rename her?
-HEE Click-

Rose Trails Barn

10:26:50 Echo/ Eco Friendly

I was specifically looking for a good color that would go with him because I can't make up my mind.

Rose Trails Barn

10:26:00 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Nemi
Alright

xA Million Thoughts

10:25:14 ⚜️.MT.

I know she was a 1-4 but I think she looks better without the varnish.
-HEE Click-

10:23:16 AL, mum to Nemi

Echo, if you want colourful foals from him you should pair him with mares that are genetested and have multiple genes they have 2 copies of

10:22:51 Nippy/Nipple

Oooh. hows his personality?

Greenheart Stables

10:22:35 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Nippy
Enchi Desert Ghost

10:22:12 Tele

Echo
If you want a colorful horse, any horse with tons of genetics would be good

Rose Trails Barn

10:22:09 Echo/ Eco Friendly

A lot*

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Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 10:53 AM

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So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737</a>

(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613</a>

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034</a>

(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 12:25 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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Red Dragon said:
So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737
(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034
(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

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