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Greenheart Stables

01:24:47 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

-HEE Click-
Nice little Peacock mare

Black Raven TBs

01:08:54

nvm i found how to feed

Black Raven TBs

01:06:09

how do i feed my horses

01:00:28 Void Malign

I just got back inside and my cat can't stop rubbing her face all over mine.

Glacier Bay Farms

12:55:47 Arctic Cove Katz

Zayreg Wesmart
From -Click- @Elysian

Old River Ranch

12:50:01 Old River /ORR

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So pretty <3

Elysian Meadows

12:49:20

i need some name ideas for this guy - was thinking another star wars name but unsure! -HEE Click-

Insignia Elites

12:47:47 Em

I think the name suits her so well! -HEE Click-

Lenalee Stables

12:41:37

Silver, just click through the ABLBs or the WWW LBs

12:40:24

Stud suggestions under 40K? -HEE Click-

Magnolian Ponies

12:20:43 Zen/Zane

Oh wow lone star, i have a very familiar colt :D -HEE Click-

Crescent Estate

12:19:42 River / Crescent

Well I guess I'm starting RID's again
-HEE Click-

12:19:30

Wow!
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Campbell Equestrian

12:07:04 Hails

I would really like there to be a new top JLB stallion that isn’t blue roan. I have too many blue roan SH

Insignia Elites

12:06:41 Em

I don't know the number but its hot hot outside where I am

12:02:34 :Lulu

Its in the 90s here, but heat index is 108* :(

Snitches' Stitches

11:59:36 Snitch

Right with you Fawn at 94

11:55:32 Void Malign

I don't look forward to wilting from the heat

Solaris

11:54:17 Sol | PONs

70 right now for us xD

11:53:49 Fawn

Ours is at 96 and climbing right now

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Greenheart Stables

01:24:47 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

-HEE Click-
Nice little Peacock mare

Black Raven TBs

01:08:54

nvm i found how to feed

Black Raven TBs

01:06:09

how do i feed my horses

01:00:28 Void Malign

I just got back inside and my cat can't stop rubbing her face all over mine.

Glacier Bay Farms

12:55:47 Arctic Cove Katz

Zayreg Wesmart
From -Click- @Elysian

Old River Ranch

12:50:01 Old River /ORR

-HEE Click-
So pretty <3

Elysian Meadows

12:49:20

i need some name ideas for this guy - was thinking another star wars name but unsure! -HEE Click-

Insignia Elites

12:47:47 Em

I think the name suits her so well! -HEE Click-

Lenalee Stables

12:41:37

Silver, just click through the ABLBs or the WWW LBs

12:40:24

Stud suggestions under 40K? -HEE Click-

Magnolian Ponies

12:20:43 Zen/Zane

Oh wow lone star, i have a very familiar colt :D -HEE Click-

Crescent Estate

12:19:42 River / Crescent

Well I guess I'm starting RID's again
-HEE Click-

12:19:30

Wow!
-HEE Click-

Campbell Equestrian

12:07:04 Hails

I would really like there to be a new top JLB stallion that isn’t blue roan. I have too many blue roan SH

Insignia Elites

12:06:41 Em

I don't know the number but its hot hot outside where I am

12:02:34 :Lulu

Its in the 90s here, but heat index is 108* :(

Snitches' Stitches

11:59:36 Snitch

Right with you Fawn at 94

11:55:32 Void Malign

I don't look forward to wilting from the heat

Solaris

11:54:17 Sol | PONs

70 right now for us xD

11:53:49 Fawn

Ours is at 96 and climbing right now

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September 29, 2019 01:58 PM

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Hello.. I will just have this for Critique of my art? I make it rarely so I won't put stuff up on here much.. Please be honest in what you think ;-; Thank chew!

https://postimg.cc/dLkmvCLb
What do you think of this? Is it O.K? I understand the coloring is a lot .. odd..

This is a WIP but I thought I'd share, I still have shading on the body, face hooves.. everywhere! And the mane & tail to color in... + everything else on the thing lol Also - This next piece is obviously not for use one HEE.

https://postimg.cc/7JkMSjb5
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Eek. Okay. Took alot of time off to work on line-art coloring and stuff. I decided to do a manip, so far I think it's ok. (It is a work in progress)

https://postimg.cc/SJzcWxW6

Does it seem ok so far?

Edited at December 30, 2019 11:45 PM by Broken Meadows

September 29, 2019 02:00 PM

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Fixed link

https://postimg.cc/dLkmvCLb

Edited at September 29, 2019 02:00 PM by ~Running Free~

September 29, 2019 03:46 PM

Posts: 69
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Thank you @Freedom Elites
I don't know why the link won't work..?

September 29, 2019 11:03 PM

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I like it but it does look a bit odd with the lineart horse against such a realistic background.

October 3, 2019 01:17 PM

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I think the colouring is lovely,but the mane/rail needs a bit more...shape?

October 5, 2019 09:13 PM

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Coloring highlights and shadows on the horses would improve it a lot

October 22, 2019 11:14 PM

Posts: 69
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Thank you all! I forgot about this forum :/

I have been working on shading / fitting the horses into different backgrounds.

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