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Greenheart Stables

01:24:47 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

-HEE Click-
Nice little Peacock mare

Black Raven TBs

01:08:54

nvm i found how to feed

Black Raven TBs

01:06:09

how do i feed my horses

01:00:28 Void Malign

I just got back inside and my cat can't stop rubbing her face all over mine.

Glacier Bay Farms

12:55:47 Arctic Cove Katz

Zayreg Wesmart
From -Click- @Elysian

Old River Ranch

12:50:01 Old River /ORR

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So pretty <3

Elysian Meadows

12:49:20

i need some name ideas for this guy - was thinking another star wars name but unsure! -HEE Click-

Insignia Elites

12:47:47 Em

I think the name suits her so well! -HEE Click-

Lenalee Stables

12:41:37

Silver, just click through the ABLBs or the WWW LBs

12:40:24

Stud suggestions under 40K? -HEE Click-

Magnolian Ponies

12:20:43 Zen/Zane

Oh wow lone star, i have a very familiar colt :D -HEE Click-

Crescent Estate

12:19:42 River / Crescent

Well I guess I'm starting RID's again
-HEE Click-

12:19:30

Wow!
-HEE Click-

Campbell Equestrian

12:07:04 Hails

I would really like there to be a new top JLB stallion that isn’t blue roan. I have too many blue roan SH

Insignia Elites

12:06:41 Em

I don't know the number but its hot hot outside where I am

12:02:34 :Lulu

Its in the 90s here, but heat index is 108* :(

Snitches' Stitches

11:59:36 Snitch

Right with you Fawn at 94

11:55:32 Void Malign

I don't look forward to wilting from the heat

Solaris

11:54:17 Sol | PONs

70 right now for us xD

11:53:49 Fawn

Ours is at 96 and climbing right now

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Greenheart Stables

01:24:47 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

-HEE Click-
Nice little Peacock mare

Black Raven TBs

01:08:54

nvm i found how to feed

Black Raven TBs

01:06:09

how do i feed my horses

01:00:28 Void Malign

I just got back inside and my cat can't stop rubbing her face all over mine.

Glacier Bay Farms

12:55:47 Arctic Cove Katz

Zayreg Wesmart
From -Click- @Elysian

Old River Ranch

12:50:01 Old River /ORR

-HEE Click-
So pretty <3

Elysian Meadows

12:49:20

i need some name ideas for this guy - was thinking another star wars name but unsure! -HEE Click-

Insignia Elites

12:47:47 Em

I think the name suits her so well! -HEE Click-

Lenalee Stables

12:41:37

Silver, just click through the ABLBs or the WWW LBs

12:40:24

Stud suggestions under 40K? -HEE Click-

Magnolian Ponies

12:20:43 Zen/Zane

Oh wow lone star, i have a very familiar colt :D -HEE Click-

Crescent Estate

12:19:42 River / Crescent

Well I guess I'm starting RID's again
-HEE Click-

12:19:30

Wow!
-HEE Click-

Campbell Equestrian

12:07:04 Hails

I would really like there to be a new top JLB stallion that isn’t blue roan. I have too many blue roan SH

Insignia Elites

12:06:41 Em

I don't know the number but its hot hot outside where I am

12:02:34 :Lulu

Its in the 90s here, but heat index is 108* :(

Snitches' Stitches

11:59:36 Snitch

Right with you Fawn at 94

11:55:32 Void Malign

I don't look forward to wilting from the heat

Solaris

11:54:17 Sol | PONs

70 right now for us xD

11:53:49 Fawn

Ours is at 96 and climbing right now

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October 16, 2019 08:45 PM

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I'm not done yet, but any thoughts, advice, critiques, whatever on this?

https://i.postimg.cc/xjFcGg7c/sketch1571276177472.png

Edited at October 16, 2019 08:46 PM by Ankou

October 16, 2019 08:50 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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It looks really nice so far!

I love your muscle structuring in the shoulder.

My only critiques would be the neck ties in very high it should ideally connect right above the middle line in the breast area. And the head and neck look significantly too small for the rest of the body.

But accurate proportions will come with practice. :)

October 16, 2019 09:01 PM

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Thanks so much for your help! I seriously think I have a HUGE problem with the head and neck compared to the body. At least now I have a new area to focus on next time I draw. :)

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