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Dash and Duchess
11:46:55 DD | ~Squizard~
arctic, i feel that xD i've been drawing all day too lol
QualitySH
11:46:34 Asher
-HEE Click- thats a nice surprise
Glacier Bay Farms
11:41:00 Arctic Cove Katz
A never ending work in progress
Glacier Bay Farms
11:40:37 Arctic Cove Katz
Okay now grinding more art projects
QualitySH
11:37:16 Asher
You should gift it to cadence Farms
Glacier Bay Farms
11:33:47 Arctic Cove Katz
Trying to decide who to give it to
Dash Warmbloods
11:28:22 
That’s nice of you to gift it.
Glacier Bay Farms
11:26:32 Arctic Cove Katz
Any suggestions
Glacier Bay Farms
11:25:00 Arctic Cove Katz
Just finished my newest art piece, finally. Now to figure out who to gift it to
Toulouse
11:24:26 beef
oh i see gladius. i'll have to try that tomorrow x|
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:23:34 Gladius
I finally started getting them right again, MuMu has to be at the end of the string and make sure it's correct--I copy and paste the example line in and kept forgetting to change the damn thing lol
Toulouse
11:23:13 beef
;-; river.. yeah i *love* genetics so the game not wanting to participate hurts my feelings
Lismore Studs
11:22:23 River | TB's
Beef
Same, ever since the mushroom was added I've never been able to get even one right
Toulouse
11:21:28 beef
like is it spaces instead of commas? genuinely just the formatting is confusing me
Toulouse
11:20:48 beef
yeah i did..
MC Ace
11:18:18 McFossil
MuMu WnWn
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:16:45 Gladius
beef - did you check the MuMu was correct?
Toulouse
11:15:29 beef
i'm so confused because i swear i'm entering the right format for the genetics practice and it's still telling me i have every combo wrong.
Lismore Studs
11:14:41 River | TB's
3 more parts to go!
-Click-
Dash Warmbloods
11:12:23 
So pretty yet going to grey out. -HEE Click-

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Dash and Duchess
11:46:55 DD | ~Squizard~
arctic, i feel that xD i've been drawing all day too lol
QualitySH
11:46:34 Asher
-HEE Click- thats a nice surprise
Glacier Bay Farms
11:41:00 Arctic Cove Katz
A never ending work in progress
Glacier Bay Farms
11:40:37 Arctic Cove Katz
Okay now grinding more art projects
QualitySH
11:37:16 Asher
You should gift it to cadence Farms
Glacier Bay Farms
11:33:47 Arctic Cove Katz
Trying to decide who to give it to
Dash Warmbloods
11:28:22 
That’s nice of you to gift it.
Glacier Bay Farms
11:26:32 Arctic Cove Katz
Any suggestions
Glacier Bay Farms
11:25:00 Arctic Cove Katz
Just finished my newest art piece, finally. Now to figure out who to gift it to
Toulouse
11:24:26 beef
oh i see gladius. i'll have to try that tomorrow x|
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:23:34 Gladius
I finally started getting them right again, MuMu has to be at the end of the string and make sure it's correct--I copy and paste the example line in and kept forgetting to change the damn thing lol
Toulouse
11:23:13 beef
;-; river.. yeah i *love* genetics so the game not wanting to participate hurts my feelings
Lismore Studs
11:22:23 River | TB's
Beef
Same, ever since the mushroom was added I've never been able to get even one right
Toulouse
11:21:28 beef
like is it spaces instead of commas? genuinely just the formatting is confusing me
Toulouse
11:20:48 beef
yeah i did..
MC Ace
11:18:18 McFossil
MuMu WnWn
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:16:45 Gladius
beef - did you check the MuMu was correct?
Toulouse
11:15:29 beef
i'm so confused because i swear i'm entering the right format for the genetics practice and it's still telling me i have every combo wrong.
Lismore Studs
11:14:41 River | TB's
3 more parts to go!
-Click-
Dash Warmbloods
11:12:23 
So pretty yet going to grey out. -HEE Click-

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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