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Dayseeker
09:41:36 Ly/Lyra
I wish she showed more color XD
Lismore Studs
09:39:57 River | TB's
spotty*
Lismore Studs
09:39:50 River | TB's
Ly
Aww! Little spooty butt haha
Dayseeker
09:39:04 Ly/Lyra
-HEE Click-
Rose Trails Barn
09:35:27 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Angel.
Check your mailbox
Rose Trails Barn
09:33:40 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Hi angel!
Angel Warmblood Stud
09:21:36 Angel
How do I do a post at a forum?
Ashcroft Park Stud
09:20:26 Ash
I'm just crawling my way towards Friday, have so many meetings don't have time to do any actual work
Elysian Meadows
09:14:08 
i still can’t believe Luke is #1 PON XD
Rose Trails Barn
09:11:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I hate colds.
Stormsong Manor
09:04:38 Ven
Thanks, just a poopy head cold I picked up from my germy little child
Rose Trails Barn
08:56:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I hope you get better Ven.
Stormsong Manor
08:55:04 Ven
I'm not making it all the way through. I came in sick yesterday and today because I'm in my own space but I've had enough already today
The Old Gods
08:52:25 Void Malign
the final work day before a 3 day weekend is always the worst.
All Breeds
08:50:31 Fawn
Wasn't expecting him to land decently on the LB!
-HEE Click-
Mustang Willows
08:47:53 Charlie
My Standardbred has a shark fin so I know the feeling
Orussid
08:45:46 
no, riding bareback in general hurts because of the shark fins
The Seven Sins
08:44:44 Seven
I should get up for work and get ready. I'm so tired today though 😫
Quail Run Creek
08:43:46 Quail
None of the horses I entered into federations yesterday have the mark next to their name? But when I go to the feds page there's the option to remove them
Mustang Willows
08:43:40 Charlie
Yes I prefer that too Although when I am not in pain I notice it, but when I am I don’t. Lol. Growing up I did not have a choice, we did not own saddles

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Dayseeker
09:41:36 Ly/Lyra
I wish she showed more color XD
Lismore Studs
09:39:57 River | TB's
spotty*
Lismore Studs
09:39:50 River | TB's
Ly
Aww! Little spooty butt haha
Dayseeker
09:39:04 Ly/Lyra
-HEE Click-
Rose Trails Barn
09:35:27 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Angel.
Check your mailbox
Rose Trails Barn
09:33:40 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Hi angel!
Angel Warmblood Stud
09:21:36 Angel
How do I do a post at a forum?
Ashcroft Park Stud
09:20:26 Ash
I'm just crawling my way towards Friday, have so many meetings don't have time to do any actual work
Elysian Meadows
09:14:08 
i still can’t believe Luke is #1 PON XD
Rose Trails Barn
09:11:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I hate colds.
Stormsong Manor
09:04:38 Ven
Thanks, just a poopy head cold I picked up from my germy little child
Rose Trails Barn
08:56:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I hope you get better Ven.
Stormsong Manor
08:55:04 Ven
I'm not making it all the way through. I came in sick yesterday and today because I'm in my own space but I've had enough already today
The Old Gods
08:52:25 Void Malign
the final work day before a 3 day weekend is always the worst.
All Breeds
08:50:31 Fawn
Wasn't expecting him to land decently on the LB!
-HEE Click-
Mustang Willows
08:47:53 Charlie
My Standardbred has a shark fin so I know the feeling
Orussid
08:45:46 
no, riding bareback in general hurts because of the shark fins
The Seven Sins
08:44:44 Seven
I should get up for work and get ready. I'm so tired today though 😫
Quail Run Creek
08:43:46 Quail
None of the horses I entered into federations yesterday have the mark next to their name? But when I go to the feds page there's the option to remove them
Mustang Willows
08:43:40 Charlie
Yes I prefer that too Although when I am not in pain I notice it, but when I am I don’t. Lol. Growing up I did not have a choice, we did not own saddles

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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