Horse Eden : Constructive Criticism

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Rose Trails Barn

01:25:14 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Kittens*

Rose Trails Barn

01:24:57 Echo/ Eco Friendly

These little are crushing my legs.

~Emerald Acres Stud~

01:24:20 |Swifty|

@Dogwood:
Wow he's beautiful!

Dogwood Hill Stables

01:22:51 Dogwood/Lady

-HEE Click-
Pretty boy has been many years in the making. I squealed when I rated him.

Pinkmocha Stables

01:20:33

-HEE Click- pretty girl <3

Wolf Dancer

01:18:55 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Zebz
Nice!

Dash and Duchess

01:15:59 DD | ~Squizard~

i wear a lot of random jewelry and it stains me a bunch xD

Dash and Duchess

01:15:43 DD | ~Squizard~

echo, use an alchohol wipe or rubbing alchohol, it removes the green with no hassle!

Rose Trails Barn

01:13:56 Echo/ Eco Friendly

I'm wearing a ring and it's made of copper but it always leaves a green mark.

Rose Trails Barn

01:13:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly

I don't like copper..

Purely Painted

01:05:38 Zebz SA

So. This is cool… guess the game decided to give me a welcome back present! -HEE Click-

Rose Trails Barn

12:56:05 Echo/ Eco Friendly

I like sharing :3

Rose Trails Barn

12:54:52 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Of coucourse doll

Pinkmocha Stables

12:49:24

Thank you so much T-T

Pinkmocha Stables

12:49:07

I didn’t deserve that!

Pinkmocha Stables

12:48:52

I’m going to cherish this beautiful girl ;pink heart;

Pinkmocha Stables

12:46:47

What is the pastureland thing

Imperial Topaz Farms

12:46:37

Can someone explain to me why she didn't rate EWE or EEW? I thought I matched her parents pretty well, considering she's my 1st ever homebred, so did I do something wrong while matching, or was I just not lucky?

-HEE Click-

Pinkmocha Stables

12:46:35

Alr :p

Rose Trails Barn

12:45:37 Echo/ Eco Friendly

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Rose Trails Barn

01:25:14 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Kittens*

Rose Trails Barn

01:24:57 Echo/ Eco Friendly

These little are crushing my legs.

~Emerald Acres Stud~

01:24:20 |Swifty|

@Dogwood:
Wow he's beautiful!

Dogwood Hill Stables

01:22:51 Dogwood/Lady

-HEE Click-
Pretty boy has been many years in the making. I squealed when I rated him.

Pinkmocha Stables

01:20:33

-HEE Click- pretty girl <3

Wolf Dancer

01:18:55 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Zebz
Nice!

Dash and Duchess

01:15:59 DD | ~Squizard~

i wear a lot of random jewelry and it stains me a bunch xD

Dash and Duchess

01:15:43 DD | ~Squizard~

echo, use an alchohol wipe or rubbing alchohol, it removes the green with no hassle!

Rose Trails Barn

01:13:56 Echo/ Eco Friendly

I'm wearing a ring and it's made of copper but it always leaves a green mark.

Rose Trails Barn

01:13:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly

I don't like copper..

Purely Painted

01:05:38 Zebz SA

So. This is cool… guess the game decided to give me a welcome back present! -HEE Click-

Rose Trails Barn

12:56:05 Echo/ Eco Friendly

I like sharing :3

Rose Trails Barn

12:54:52 Echo/ Eco Friendly

Of coucourse doll

Pinkmocha Stables

12:49:24

Thank you so much T-T

Pinkmocha Stables

12:49:07

I didn’t deserve that!

Pinkmocha Stables

12:48:52

I’m going to cherish this beautiful girl ;pink heart;

Pinkmocha Stables

12:46:47

What is the pastureland thing

Imperial Topaz Farms

12:46:37

Pinkmocha Stables

12:46:35

Alr :p

Rose Trails Barn

12:45:37 Echo/ Eco Friendly

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#106539
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2686
#106543
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1528
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#106698
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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! IÂ’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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