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Vahana Hollow
08:41:44 Val
Thank you all xD
Quail Run Creek
08:40:05 Quail
Val I am not even close to having the amount of ebs for any of the insane work you do, but I literally stalk every single thing you put out there. You're so talented!
All Breeds
08:39:28 Fawn
Ugh I'm so jealous of the pretty art Val 😍
Orussid
08:38:29 
I prefer not to be in pain when I ride
Mustang Willows
08:38:28 Charlie
Beautiful art
Vahana Hollow
08:37:54 Val
Sorry guys - I was in the process of Alt + Tabbing all my art stuff open, ahahaha. I was talking about the girl, who is actually indeed my stable page, LOL.
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Mustang Willows
08:37:34 Charlie
Yes. I know the feeling. I love bareback, because that how I grew up riding.
Orussid
08:35:28 
never liked riding bareback, but all my horses have been shark fins
Mustang Willows
08:31:12 Charlie
Sounds fun Centura. Next is a canter bareback. Personally it’s easier than trotting bareback
MakeEm Fancy
08:29:20 Ally 💜
My freshie is at #9 ABLB 🥹
*Stable of Jewels*
08:27:16 Jewelbug🍄
Ah those RO where you blew through all your money and have some regrets but some not regrets too...those are the days xD
Centura stable
08:24:43 Centura
still buzzing from having my first ever no stirrup canter!
Centura stable
08:21:38 Centura
val
that is your stable page. you do have a nice stable page though
Telepath
08:21:11 Tele
Mac
Shes so pretty! Congrats!
McSmith Ranch
08:20:21 Mac | Thing 2
At least is champagne and appy

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Telepath
08:14:44 Tele
Val
Thats your stable page xD
Vahana Hollow
08:13:30 Val
-HEE Click-

This one is walking on thin ice herself. Dunno if she is worth another 1.3mil WEE combo dump. Might need to prove herself before she sees another gnome >.<
Angel Warmblood Stud
08:09:24 Angel
This RO hates me not a single www
Vancouver
08:09:23 Ana / Van
Pinky
Yeah! Zomb arts ^^
Pink Mocha
08:08:36 Mocha/Pinky 🎀
That art is gorgeous van

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Vahana Hollow
08:41:44 Val
Thank you all xD
Quail Run Creek
08:40:05 Quail
Val I am not even close to having the amount of ebs for any of the insane work you do, but I literally stalk every single thing you put out there. You're so talented!
All Breeds
08:39:28 Fawn
Ugh I'm so jealous of the pretty art Val 😍
Orussid
08:38:29 
I prefer not to be in pain when I ride
Mustang Willows
08:38:28 Charlie
Beautiful art
Vahana Hollow
08:37:54 Val
Sorry guys - I was in the process of Alt + Tabbing all my art stuff open, ahahaha. I was talking about the girl, who is actually indeed my stable page, LOL.
-HEE Click-
Mustang Willows
08:37:34 Charlie
Yes. I know the feeling. I love bareback, because that how I grew up riding.
Orussid
08:35:28 
never liked riding bareback, but all my horses have been shark fins
Mustang Willows
08:31:12 Charlie
Sounds fun Centura. Next is a canter bareback. Personally it’s easier than trotting bareback
MakeEm Fancy
08:29:20 Ally 💜
My freshie is at #9 ABLB 🥹
*Stable of Jewels*
08:27:16 Jewelbug🍄
Ah those RO where you blew through all your money and have some regrets but some not regrets too...those are the days xD
Centura stable
08:24:43 Centura
still buzzing from having my first ever no stirrup canter!
Centura stable
08:21:38 Centura
val
that is your stable page. you do have a nice stable page though
Telepath
08:21:11 Tele
Mac
Shes so pretty! Congrats!
McSmith Ranch
08:20:21 Mac | Thing 2
At least is champagne and appy

-HEE Click-
Telepath
08:14:44 Tele
Val
Thats your stable page xD
Vahana Hollow
08:13:30 Val
-HEE Click-

This one is walking on thin ice herself. Dunno if she is worth another 1.3mil WEE combo dump. Might need to prove herself before she sees another gnome >.<
Angel Warmblood Stud
08:09:24 Angel
This RO hates me not a single www
Vancouver
08:09:23 Ana / Van
Pinky
Yeah! Zomb arts ^^
Pink Mocha
08:08:36 Mocha/Pinky 🎀
That art is gorgeous van

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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