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Greenheart Stables
01:24:47 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
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Nice little Peacock mare
Black Raven TBs
01:08:54 
nvm i found how to feed
Black Raven TBs
01:06:09 
how do i feed my horses
The Old Gods
01:00:28 Void Malign
I just got back inside and my cat can't stop rubbing her face all over mine.
Glacier Bay Farms
12:55:47 Arctic Cove Katz
Zayreg Wesmart
From -Click- @Elysian
Old River Ranch
12:50:01 Old River /ORR
-HEE Click-
So pretty <3
Elysian Meadows
12:49:20 
i need some name ideas for this guy - was thinking another star wars name but unsure! -HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
12:47:47 Em
I think the name suits her so well! -HEE Click-
Lenalee Stables
12:41:37 
Silver, just click through the ABLBs or the WWW LBs
Silver Stirrup
12:40:24 
Stud suggestions under 40K? -HEE Click-
Magnolian Ponies
12:20:43 Zen/Zane
Oh wow lone star, i have a very familiar colt :D -HEE Click-
Crescent Estate
12:19:42 River / Crescent
Well I guess I'm starting RID's again
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The Lone Star
12:19:30 
Wow!
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Campbell Equestrian
12:07:04 Hails
I would really like there to be a new top JLB stallion that isn’t blue roan. I have too many blue roan SH
Insignia Elites
12:06:41 Em
I don't know the number but its hot hot outside where I am
Nevernight
12:02:34 :Lulu
Its in the 90s here, but heat index is 108* :(
Snitches' Stitches
11:59:36 Snitch
Right with you Fawn at 94
The Old Gods
11:55:32 Void Malign
I don't look forward to wilting from the heat
Solaris
11:54:17 Sol | PONs
70 right now for us xD
All Breeds
11:53:49 Fawn
Ours is at 96 and climbing right now

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Greenheart Stables
01:24:47 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
-HEE Click-
Nice little Peacock mare
Black Raven TBs
01:08:54 
nvm i found how to feed
Black Raven TBs
01:06:09 
how do i feed my horses
The Old Gods
01:00:28 Void Malign
I just got back inside and my cat can't stop rubbing her face all over mine.
Glacier Bay Farms
12:55:47 Arctic Cove Katz
Zayreg Wesmart
From -Click- @Elysian
Old River Ranch
12:50:01 Old River /ORR
-HEE Click-
So pretty <3
Elysian Meadows
12:49:20 
i need some name ideas for this guy - was thinking another star wars name but unsure! -HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
12:47:47 Em
I think the name suits her so well! -HEE Click-
Lenalee Stables
12:41:37 
Silver, just click through the ABLBs or the WWW LBs
Silver Stirrup
12:40:24 
Stud suggestions under 40K? -HEE Click-
Magnolian Ponies
12:20:43 Zen/Zane
Oh wow lone star, i have a very familiar colt :D -HEE Click-
Crescent Estate
12:19:42 River / Crescent
Well I guess I'm starting RID's again
-HEE Click-
The Lone Star
12:19:30 
Wow!
-HEE Click-
Campbell Equestrian
12:07:04 Hails
I would really like there to be a new top JLB stallion that isn’t blue roan. I have too many blue roan SH
Insignia Elites
12:06:41 Em
I don't know the number but its hot hot outside where I am
Nevernight
12:02:34 :Lulu
Its in the 90s here, but heat index is 108* :(
Snitches' Stitches
11:59:36 Snitch
Right with you Fawn at 94
The Old Gods
11:55:32 Void Malign
I don't look forward to wilting from the heat
Solaris
11:54:17 Sol | PONs
70 right now for us xD
All Breeds
11:53:49 Fawn
Ours is at 96 and climbing right now

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Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:26 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/pT0bBfVZ/Untitled229-1.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/wTVYD0YS/Untitled230-1.jpg

Thoughts? Critiques? I've been practicing.

If I were to reopen my shop (should I?) What tier should I be in? What would be fair prices?

Edit: some credits

Edited at September 15, 2019 01:28 PM by Golden Meadows
Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:51 PM

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I love it
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:23 PM

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I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:26 PM

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Raven Hollow Elite said:
I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!


I leave my pieces bare so the auction winner can have them added ;)
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:33 PM


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I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.

Edited at September 14, 2019 01:35 PM by Squeeing Onion RIDs
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:38 PM

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Squeeing Onion RIDs said:
I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.



If you zoom in, I painted splishes on the feet ;)

Thanks :DD. I'll brightest the credits :D
Art Critique September 15, 2019 01:28 PM

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Should I reopen my art shop? If so, what would be fair prices and what tier would I be in?
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:10 PM

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I would say Tier 1 at 30-45k would be okay.
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:20 PM

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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=57&t=31246

How's that pricing?

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