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Greenheart Stables
01:24:47 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
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Nice little Peacock mare
Black Raven TBs
01:08:54 
nvm i found how to feed
Black Raven TBs
01:06:09 
how do i feed my horses
The Old Gods
01:00:28 Void Malign
I just got back inside and my cat can't stop rubbing her face all over mine.
Glacier Bay Farms
12:55:47 Arctic Cove Katz
Zayreg Wesmart
From -Click- @Elysian
Old River Ranch
12:50:01 Old River /ORR
-HEE Click-
So pretty <3
Elysian Meadows
12:49:20 
i need some name ideas for this guy - was thinking another star wars name but unsure! -HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
12:47:47 Em
I think the name suits her so well! -HEE Click-
Lenalee Stables
12:41:37 
Silver, just click through the ABLBs or the WWW LBs
Silver Stirrup
12:40:24 
Stud suggestions under 40K? -HEE Click-
Magnolian Ponies
12:20:43 Zen/Zane
Oh wow lone star, i have a very familiar colt :D -HEE Click-
Crescent Estate
12:19:42 River / Crescent
Well I guess I'm starting RID's again
-HEE Click-
The Lone Star
12:19:30 
Wow!
-HEE Click-
Campbell Equestrian
12:07:04 Hails
I would really like there to be a new top JLB stallion that isn’t blue roan. I have too many blue roan SH
Insignia Elites
12:06:41 Em
I don't know the number but its hot hot outside where I am
Nevernight
12:02:34 :Lulu
Its in the 90s here, but heat index is 108* :(
Snitches' Stitches
11:59:36 Snitch
Right with you Fawn at 94
The Old Gods
11:55:32 Void Malign
I don't look forward to wilting from the heat
Solaris
11:54:17 Sol | PONs
70 right now for us xD
All Breeds
11:53:49 Fawn
Ours is at 96 and climbing right now

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Greenheart Stables
01:24:47 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
-HEE Click-
Nice little Peacock mare
Black Raven TBs
01:08:54 
nvm i found how to feed
Black Raven TBs
01:06:09 
how do i feed my horses
The Old Gods
01:00:28 Void Malign
I just got back inside and my cat can't stop rubbing her face all over mine.
Glacier Bay Farms
12:55:47 Arctic Cove Katz
Zayreg Wesmart
From -Click- @Elysian
Old River Ranch
12:50:01 Old River /ORR
-HEE Click-
So pretty <3
Elysian Meadows
12:49:20 
i need some name ideas for this guy - was thinking another star wars name but unsure! -HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
12:47:47 Em
I think the name suits her so well! -HEE Click-
Lenalee Stables
12:41:37 
Silver, just click through the ABLBs or the WWW LBs
Silver Stirrup
12:40:24 
Stud suggestions under 40K? -HEE Click-
Magnolian Ponies
12:20:43 Zen/Zane
Oh wow lone star, i have a very familiar colt :D -HEE Click-
Crescent Estate
12:19:42 River / Crescent
Well I guess I'm starting RID's again
-HEE Click-
The Lone Star
12:19:30 
Wow!
-HEE Click-
Campbell Equestrian
12:07:04 Hails
I would really like there to be a new top JLB stallion that isn’t blue roan. I have too many blue roan SH
Insignia Elites
12:06:41 Em
I don't know the number but its hot hot outside where I am
Nevernight
12:02:34 :Lulu
Its in the 90s here, but heat index is 108* :(
Snitches' Stitches
11:59:36 Snitch
Right with you Fawn at 94
The Old Gods
11:55:32 Void Malign
I don't look forward to wilting from the heat
Solaris
11:54:17 Sol | PONs
70 right now for us xD
All Breeds
11:53:49 Fawn
Ours is at 96 and climbing right now

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Critique? September 19, 2019 02:46 PM


Diamanté
 
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So... I recently started using GIMP in addition to my usually art process. What do y'all think? Is there anything that jumps out at you as something I could do better?

https://i.postimg.cc/Hk3XmFtS/ISA-fin.jpg
Critique? September 19, 2019 04:59 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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I love that piece, I think the Bridle is too bright/glowy.
Critique? September 19, 2019 05:46 PM


LostCause
 
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Pretty!

I love a good backlight glow on a horse, but it may be too bright/needs to fade out a little more to make it appear more blended.

If possible, maybe a little bit different blend on that ground hoof; it looks like the hoof just poofed below the coronet band.

I agree with Raindrop, the bridle is a bit too bright. I had difficulty deciphering that it was a bridle due to the head angle, so perhaps some sort of defined lines are needed.

Edited at September 19, 2019 05:48 PM by LostCause
Critique? September 19, 2019 05:54 PM


WildWillow
 
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I personally think the horse is too bright in places for the background. Either lighten the background or darken the horse. If you are really wanting a glow behind the horse, lower the opacity. The glow, when it is that bright and that solid, looks odd since there is no obvious light source. I would also add a few more highlights onto the horse and the mane and tail. The horse looks quite dull when it has the glow behind it.
I would also edit out the bridle or lower the brightness. It took me a few seconds and a zoom in to actually realize that it was a bridle.
The edges of the horse also looks quite blurry. I would sharpen the horse up a bit. I would also sharpen the background. When I zoom in on the footing of the horse, the "front" of the background is just as blurry as the "back" of the background. Because of this reason, the splash on the footing looks too sharp and out of place compared to the rest of the background. I would sharpen the front of the background and slightly blur the splash to get them to match.
I hope this makes sense. :) If you need clarification - feel free to mail me. I can be a bit confusing at times lol!

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