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River
01:13:21 ♡ River
Spring
Same, our HOA specifically said no fireworks and people in our neighborhood are still doing it
DSD Training Center
01:12:08 Spring <3
I'm so done with fireworks. You still got a day till the 4th people. Stop blowing up your money
Solaris
01:09:17 Sol | PONs
McFosil
Reroll!
Oak River Farms
12:52:46 Oakie
-HEE Click- swoon
MC Ace
12:45:51 McFossil
Dang Momma really outdid herself. To reroll or not? That is the question??

Got some appy for the LB's

-HEE Click-
DSD Training Center
12:40:47 Spring <3
Ohhh he's a cutie
-HEE Click-
FrostedLab
12:26:14 
oops -HEE Click-
FrostedLab
12:26:02 
I love this mare so much! She even gave me a EWE!
Glacier Bay Farms
12:25:02 Arctic Cove Katz
As some of my art pieces
Glacier Bay Farms
12:24:23 Arctic Cove Katz
Yes I do
Port Royal Equines
12:23:21 Elfie
The conformation and hooves are surprisingly well drawn for such a simple artwork. Do you do pixel art by chance glacier?
Glacier Bay Farms
12:19:49 Arctic Cove Katz
I gave this one to Eve
-Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
12:18:49 Arctic Cove Katz
Speechless, jaw on the floor, Elfie
Port Royal Equines
12:17:29 Elfie
I also finished an art today! I am super happy with it.
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
12:14:40 DD | ~Squizard~
thanks!
Glacier Bay Farms
12:14:05 Arctic Cove Katz
DD, nice
Dash and Duchess
12:09:18 DD | ~Squizard~
arctic, a few things for artfight!
-Click-
-Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
11:58:52 Arctic Cove Katz
What art have you been working on, DD
Glacier Bay Farms
11:55:53 Arctic Cove Katz
I can’t remember if I made art for you or not
Dash and Duchess
11:46:55 DD | ~Squizard~
arctic, i feel that xD i've been drawing all day too lol

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River
01:13:21 ♡ River
Spring
Same, our HOA specifically said no fireworks and people in our neighborhood are still doing it
DSD Training Center
01:12:08 Spring <3
I'm so done with fireworks. You still got a day till the 4th people. Stop blowing up your money
Solaris
01:09:17 Sol | PONs
McFosil
Reroll!
Oak River Farms
12:52:46 Oakie
-HEE Click- swoon
MC Ace
12:45:51 McFossil
Dang Momma really outdid herself. To reroll or not? That is the question??

Got some appy for the LB's

-HEE Click-
DSD Training Center
12:40:47 Spring <3
Ohhh he's a cutie
-HEE Click-
FrostedLab
12:26:14 
oops -HEE Click-
FrostedLab
12:26:02 
I love this mare so much! She even gave me a EWE!
Glacier Bay Farms
12:25:02 Arctic Cove Katz
As some of my art pieces
Glacier Bay Farms
12:24:23 Arctic Cove Katz
Yes I do
Port Royal Equines
12:23:21 Elfie
The conformation and hooves are surprisingly well drawn for such a simple artwork. Do you do pixel art by chance glacier?
Glacier Bay Farms
12:19:49 Arctic Cove Katz
I gave this one to Eve
-Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
12:18:49 Arctic Cove Katz
Speechless, jaw on the floor, Elfie
Port Royal Equines
12:17:29 Elfie
I also finished an art today! I am super happy with it.
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
12:14:40 DD | ~Squizard~
thanks!
Glacier Bay Farms
12:14:05 Arctic Cove Katz
DD, nice
Dash and Duchess
12:09:18 DD | ~Squizard~
arctic, a few things for artfight!
-Click-
-Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
11:58:52 Arctic Cove Katz
What art have you been working on, DD
Glacier Bay Farms
11:55:53 Arctic Cove Katz
I can’t remember if I made art for you or not
Dash and Duchess
11:46:55 DD | ~Squizard~
arctic, i feel that xD i've been drawing all day too lol

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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