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The Lazy Ninja
11:24:18 Jessie
She is beautiful!
Flying Dreams Farm
11:23:47 Queen of Wakanda
Guys!!! This RO has started off wonderful! I am so excited for her to grow up! -HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
11:23:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Also black chestnut jealous
Cloud Peak Stables
11:23:13 Cloud
Oh wow Halls, I have yet to get a black chestnut. I'm so jealous!
Whispering Wood Barn
11:22:04 ~Whispy~
Hails, *-* Ooo Congrats!
Guard Horseman Gang
11:20:51 Chaos, GHG
Ooo he is yummy
Campbell Equestrian
11:20:27 Hails
-HEE Click-

Currently drooling over him. I have never had a black chestnut before
Guard Horseman Gang
11:16:39 Chaos, GHG
Thanks arctic
She already gave me a www this year and usually it's 1 www and a eww combo
Painted Perfection
11:15:03 Luna
.....sure
Glacier Bay Farms
11:14:59 Arctic Cove Katz
Crossing my fingers for you, GHG
Guard Horseman Gang
11:14:27 Chaos, GHG
I'm hoping for EWW+
Guard Horseman Gang
11:14:06 Chaos, GHG
My www producing mare will have her 2nd embryo drawn on the 4th of July XD
Glacier Bay Farms
11:14:05 Arctic Cove Katz
That’s what I want for breakfast this morning
Painted Perfection
11:13:23 Luna
.....I thought someone got in trouble for spamming that stuff in chat the other day. A mod said not to do that anymore..
Glacier Bay Farms
11:12:31 Arctic Cove Katz
Sausage
Glacier Bay Farms
11:11:54 Arctic Cove Katz
Chicken
Rose Trails Barn
10:56:52 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Morning
Craic Magic Stables
10:48:56 
last month i bred so many W rating foals even a WWW this month ive bred 2 foals with a W rating how is my luck this bad
The Pirate King
10:48:28 The Armada
lovely. I forgot the pay the BM and my horses didn't show yesterday
Painted Perfection
10:48:18 Luna
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

My pride and joys. I'm so happy with these girls. This is my WWW PON foundation line

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The Lazy Ninja
11:24:18 Jessie
She is beautiful!
Flying Dreams Farm
11:23:47 Queen of Wakanda
Guys!!! This RO has started off wonderful! I am so excited for her to grow up! -HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
11:23:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Also black chestnut jealous
Cloud Peak Stables
11:23:13 Cloud
Oh wow Halls, I have yet to get a black chestnut. I'm so jealous!
Whispering Wood Barn
11:22:04 ~Whispy~
Hails, *-* Ooo Congrats!
Guard Horseman Gang
11:20:51 Chaos, GHG
Ooo he is yummy
Campbell Equestrian
11:20:27 Hails
-HEE Click-

Currently drooling over him. I have never had a black chestnut before
Guard Horseman Gang
11:16:39 Chaos, GHG
Thanks arctic
She already gave me a www this year and usually it's 1 www and a eww combo
Painted Perfection
11:15:03 Luna
.....sure
Glacier Bay Farms
11:14:59 Arctic Cove Katz
Crossing my fingers for you, GHG
Guard Horseman Gang
11:14:27 Chaos, GHG
I'm hoping for EWW+
Guard Horseman Gang
11:14:06 Chaos, GHG
My www producing mare will have her 2nd embryo drawn on the 4th of July XD
Glacier Bay Farms
11:14:05 Arctic Cove Katz
That’s what I want for breakfast this morning
Painted Perfection
11:13:23 Luna
.....I thought someone got in trouble for spamming that stuff in chat the other day. A mod said not to do that anymore..
Glacier Bay Farms
11:12:31 Arctic Cove Katz
Sausage
Glacier Bay Farms
11:11:54 Arctic Cove Katz
Chicken
Rose Trails Barn
10:56:52 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Morning
Craic Magic Stables
10:48:56 
last month i bred so many W rating foals even a WWW this month ive bred 2 foals with a W rating how is my luck this bad
The Pirate King
10:48:28 The Armada
lovely. I forgot the pay the BM and my horses didn't show yesterday
Painted Perfection
10:48:18 Luna
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

My pride and joys. I'm so happy with these girls. This is my WWW PON foundation line

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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