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Pink Mocha
10:44:56 Pinky 🎀
Oh no Phan
Glacier Bay Farms
10:43:09 Arctic Cove Katz
Never mind, she has already been named
Glacier Bay Farms
10:42:23 Arctic Cove Katz
@Silent Moon
Glacier Bay Farms
10:41:58 Arctic Cove Katz
Winter Warrior Queen
Arabes d'Arnac
10:40:29 Phan
I'm so mad I didn't put a breeding requirement on my freshie. A bunch of PPP mares got put to him...
Rose Trails Barn
10:34:24 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thank you moon
Silent Moon
10:33:23 
Echo
That sounds good
Tema Farms
10:32:20 Tema
How`s this for an idea? Stable Subscription/ Auction Alert
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Rose Trails Barn
10:30:58 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Plastered
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Maybe plastere0 cement?
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:17 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Shes cute..
Silent Moon
10:29:03 
Morning chat, if it is morning.. Should I rename her?
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Rose Trails Barn
10:26:50 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I was specifically looking for a good color that would go with him because I can't make up my mind.
Rose Trails Barn
10:26:00 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Nemi
Alright
xA Million Thoughts
10:25:14 ⚜️.MT.
I know she was a 1-4 but I think she looks better without the varnish.
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Motonemi
10:23:16 AL, mum to Nemi
Echo, if you want colourful foals from him you should pair him with mares that are genetested and have multiple genes they have 2 copies of
Nippy Equine
10:22:51 Nippy/Nipple
Oooh. hows his personality?
Greenheart Stables
10:22:35 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Nippy
Enchi Desert Ghost
Telepath
10:22:12 Tele
Echo
If you want a colorful horse, any horse with tons of genetics would be good
Rose Trails Barn
10:22:09 Echo/ Eco Friendly
A lot*

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Pink Mocha
10:44:56 Pinky 🎀
Oh no Phan
Glacier Bay Farms
10:43:09 Arctic Cove Katz
Never mind, she has already been named
Glacier Bay Farms
10:42:23 Arctic Cove Katz
@Silent Moon
Glacier Bay Farms
10:41:58 Arctic Cove Katz
Winter Warrior Queen
Arabes d'Arnac
10:40:29 Phan
I'm so mad I didn't put a breeding requirement on my freshie. A bunch of PPP mares got put to him...
Rose Trails Barn
10:34:24 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thank you moon
Silent Moon
10:33:23 
Echo
That sounds good
Tema Farms
10:32:20 Tema
How`s this for an idea? Stable Subscription/ Auction Alert
-HEE Click-
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:58 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Plastered
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Maybe plastere0 cement?
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:17 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Shes cute..
Silent Moon
10:29:03 
Morning chat, if it is morning.. Should I rename her?
-HEE Click-
Rose Trails Barn
10:26:50 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I was specifically looking for a good color that would go with him because I can't make up my mind.
Rose Trails Barn
10:26:00 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Nemi
Alright
xA Million Thoughts
10:25:14 ⚜️.MT.
I know she was a 1-4 but I think she looks better without the varnish.
-HEE Click-
Motonemi
10:23:16 AL, mum to Nemi
Echo, if you want colourful foals from him you should pair him with mares that are genetested and have multiple genes they have 2 copies of
Nippy Equine
10:22:51 Nippy/Nipple
Oooh. hows his personality?
Greenheart Stables
10:22:35 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Nippy
Enchi Desert Ghost
Telepath
10:22:12 Tele
Echo
If you want a colorful horse, any horse with tons of genetics would be good
Rose Trails Barn
10:22:09 Echo/ Eco Friendly
A lot*

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM

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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


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*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM

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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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