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Pegasus Lane

10:54:55 Peggy (or) Peg

Ohhh I also have POTS!

Aww Win 😫
I was supposed to move a few weeks after I tore my tendon but wasn't worth paying rent if I wasn't going to be training lmao

Wolf Dancer

10:54:54 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Win
Oof I'm sorry your in the hospital so often >.< I had to go in the spring, my colon twisted without us knowing and they had to do massive surgery and I would be quite happy to never have to go again >.>

MakeEm Fancy

10:54:53 Ally 💜

Yeah but cant afford to be off my knee for weeks with my kids and animals. Maybe in a year or so I can do it

Winter Curtain

10:54:40 Win | Water

Why is everyone suffering here.

Wolf Dancer

10:53:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Peggy
Oof that's rough >.>

Sunni

10:53:36 Sunni bunny

Angel I gotta have all my teeth removed one day.
5 are baby teeth, 2 or missing luckily no one can see them.
I brush my teeth daily too and still they are just bad.

Ally ouch, I know that adds pressure within the knee.

Blue Sky Equestrian

10:53:28 Aris/Quinn

I have POTS

Winter Curtain

10:53:27 Win | Water

Peggy, i get that. Also had big plans for the rest of the year...

Pegasus Lane

10:53:27 Peggy (or) Peg

I have lyme... so I was training 4-6 hours a day on top of classes and then going home and spending another 3 hours on animal chores. Was/is rough when it's in full swing 🙃

MakeEm Fancy

10:53:09 Ally 💜

I have chronic headaches. Its not fun

Wolf Dancer

10:53:07 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Peggy
Ohh that's such a awesome sport! I admire you for being able to do that! lol I do XC and Pole Vault primarily and a few other events and sports besides those lol

Glacier Bay Cove

10:52:50 Arctic Katz

51 turning 100

Blue Sky Equestrian

10:52:23 Aris/Quinn

I also have a Chronic condtion, its not fun

Pegasus Lane

10:52:11 Peggy (or) Peg

Figure skating :pp had some huge plans for this year before I tore my tendon

Glacier Bay Cove

10:52:08 Arctic Katz

Chronic conditions suck

Winter Curtain

10:51:57 Win | Water

Sunni, i'm 17, but i feel like i'm 99. Like, literally, i was in the hospital so many times, i take painkillers for the broken bones... I feel so old.

MakeEm Fancy

10:51:36 Ally 💜

Both 😭

Angels angels

10:51:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Yeah I need more than just a root canal but that is the most important. I have a hole to the nerve. But no insurance and I have heen told dental insurance doesn't cover much anyways
I am also young lol only 24

Hummingbird Meadows

10:51:31 Bird

I'm 25 and not healthy, but that's due to chronic conditions I struggle to control.

Pegasus Lane

10:51:31 Peggy (or) Peg

Yeah but it is and if you want to be able to do anything without pain I'd listen to the docs :p They usually know what they're talking about

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Pegasus Lane

10:54:55 Peggy (or) Peg

Ohhh I also have POTS!

Aww Win 😫
I was supposed to move a few weeks after I tore my tendon but wasn't worth paying rent if I wasn't going to be training lmao

Wolf Dancer

10:54:54 Wolf Burger (Leg)

MakeEm Fancy

10:54:53 Ally 💜

Yeah but cant afford to be off my knee for weeks with my kids and animals. Maybe in a year or so I can do it

Winter Curtain

10:54:40 Win | Water

Why is everyone suffering here.

Wolf Dancer

10:53:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Peggy
Oof that's rough >.>

Sunni

10:53:36 Sunni bunny

Blue Sky Equestrian

10:53:28 Aris/Quinn

I have POTS

Winter Curtain

10:53:27 Win | Water

Peggy, i get that. Also had big plans for the rest of the year...

Pegasus Lane

10:53:27 Peggy (or) Peg

I have lyme... so I was training 4-6 hours a day on top of classes and then going home and spending another 3 hours on animal chores. Was/is rough when it's in full swing 🙃

MakeEm Fancy

10:53:09 Ally 💜

I have chronic headaches. Its not fun

Wolf Dancer

10:53:07 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Peggy
Ohh that's such a awesome sport! I admire you for being able to do that! lol I do XC and Pole Vault primarily and a few other events and sports besides those lol

Glacier Bay Cove

10:52:50 Arctic Katz

51 turning 100

Blue Sky Equestrian

10:52:23 Aris/Quinn

I also have a Chronic condtion, its not fun

Pegasus Lane

10:52:11 Peggy (or) Peg

Figure skating :pp had some huge plans for this year before I tore my tendon

Glacier Bay Cove

10:52:08 Arctic Katz

Chronic conditions suck

Winter Curtain

10:51:57 Win | Water

Sunni, i'm 17, but i feel like i'm 99. Like, literally, i was in the hospital so many times, i take painkillers for the broken bones... I feel so old.

MakeEm Fancy

10:51:36 Ally 💜

Both 😭

Angels angels

10:51:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Hummingbird Meadows

10:51:31 Bird

I'm 25 and not healthy, but that's due to chronic conditions I struggle to control.

Pegasus Lane

10:51:31 Peggy (or) Peg

Yeah but it is and if you want to be able to do anything without pain I'd listen to the docs :p They usually know what they're talking about

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July 31, 2018 09:12 PM

Racing_Paints

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I need some feedback on how this looks so far before I do the tail

https://image.ibb.co/mEVRyz/Untitled59_4.jpg

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July 31, 2018 09:14 PM

Former Stable

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The mane is nice, But the markings look very unrealistic. So does the way the hooves sink into the flowers.

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July 31, 2018 09:14 PM

Wildwood Stables

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looks good but maybe try to make the horse look like its standing in the grass not in front of it

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July 31, 2018 09:15 PM

Racing_Paints

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Celestial Estates said:
The mane is nice, But the markings look very unrealistic. So does the way the hooves sink into the flowers.

How do you think I could fix that? I used the lasso tool on ibis paint X for the markings

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July 31, 2018 09:16 PM

Racing_Paints

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How do you think I could fix it?

Wildwood Stables said:
looks good but maybe try to make the horse look like its standing in the grass not in front of it

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July 31, 2018 09:34 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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The manes color is nice, but the shape strongly reminds me of a mullet.

I would really study the mechanics of hair. They bend and wave. I would also suggest adding different length strands. Right now they all appear the same length, which is what is causing the mullet appearence.

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July 31, 2018 09:42 PM

Racing_Paints

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Jellos Warmbloods said:
The manes color is nice, but the shape strongly reminds me of a mullet.

I would really study the mechanics of hair. They bend and wave. I would also suggest adding different length strands. Right now they all appear the same length, which is what is causing the mullet appearence.

Ok thank you for the feedback also do you know how I could fix the leg markings and the feet in the flowers

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July 31, 2018 09:46 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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You need to add some shadowing to the legs.

as far as the ground connection, think of walking through a field of flowers. How would they break up your leg profile?

Would it be a straight line? How high do flowers go up ones leg?

Also dont forget to add a shadow. It's sunny outside.

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July 31, 2018 10:44 PM

Racing_Paints

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Jellos Warmbloods said:
You need to add some shadowing to the legs.
as far as the ground connection, think of walking through a field of flowers. How would they break up your leg profile?
Would it be a straight line? How high do flowers go up ones leg?

Also dont forget to add a shadow. It's sunny outside.

Ok I'll have to make it look like that

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