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Glacier Bay Cove

08:10:20 Arctic Katz

Very nice horse, Tears

08:06:39

Thank you!

08:05:49 Sting

That is NOICE! Congrats

08:05:27 Vixie

:O Congrats!

08:05:09

-HEE Click-
1 up wk 3!

08:03:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Breeding attention on RO. Feed, pay, train only after that

08:02:18 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Sting, in that case we are two. Its pretty much how I handle my SD account

08:01:03 Sting

I sound like a horrible mother... o.o

07:59:30 Sting

Val.
I just keep training em until they die.
Ignore them and let the BM do the hard yards.

Valhalla Acreage

07:58:46 Eivor

yeah true just i get confused when too wait the 4 weeks after leveling up thats when i get pretty frustrated at myself

07:57:44 Tobi | Nix

Same Sting

That's a pretty gray Vixie.

07:57:33 Ceci / (Call me) AL

I have seen people complain about her but I still think she is better than not showing at all

07:57:00 Vixie

at least we got the grey part down, now to just pray that the babies are decent lol

07:56:43 Sting

I only ever use the BM. She does alright for me. My care factor is quite low for showing.

Valhalla Acreage

07:56:34 Eivor

not really AL

07:55:33 Ceci / (Call me) AL

So cute she is Vixie

07:55:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Eivor, you are premium. Have you tried the BM?

07:54:16 Vixie

:O she's GG
-HEE Click-

Valhalla Acreage

07:49:26 Eivor

i tried and tried to show and its not something i can do

Gold Standard Estate

07:43:30 Pixel

my top 3 earners right now are all show geldings. Show gelding barns are how I fund my account lol

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Glacier Bay Cove

08:10:20 Arctic Katz

Very nice horse, Tears

08:06:39

Thank you!

08:05:49 Sting

That is NOICE! Congrats

08:05:27 Vixie

:O Congrats!

08:05:09

-HEE Click-
1 up wk 3!

08:03:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Breeding attention on RO. Feed, pay, train only after that

08:02:18 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Sting, in that case we are two. Its pretty much how I handle my SD account

08:01:03 Sting

I sound like a horrible mother... o.o

07:59:30 Sting

Val.
I just keep training em until they die.
Ignore them and let the BM do the hard yards.

Valhalla Acreage

07:58:46 Eivor

yeah true just i get confused when too wait the 4 weeks after leveling up thats when i get pretty frustrated at myself

07:57:44 Tobi | Nix

Same Sting

That's a pretty gray Vixie.

07:57:33 Ceci / (Call me) AL

I have seen people complain about her but I still think she is better than not showing at all

07:57:00 Vixie

at least we got the grey part down, now to just pray that the babies are decent lol

07:56:43 Sting

I only ever use the BM. She does alright for me. My care factor is quite low for showing.

Valhalla Acreage

07:56:34 Eivor

not really AL

07:55:33 Ceci / (Call me) AL

So cute she is Vixie

07:55:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Eivor, you are premium. Have you tried the BM?

07:54:16 Vixie

:O she's GG
-HEE Click-

Valhalla Acreage

07:49:26 Eivor

i tried and tried to show and its not something i can do

Gold Standard Estate

07:43:30 Pixel

my top 3 earners right now are all show geldings. Show gelding barns are how I fund my account lol

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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