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06:03:55 Loony/Loony Tune

Hmm I think I’ll go with white…

Dash and Duchess

06:03:38 DD | ~Squizard~

Oh my god 🥹
-HEE Click-
AU!! My first since my original WWW filly ToT

Dash and Duchess

06:01:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Crossing my fingers >.< time to train!

Silver Melody Acres

06:01:47 Solar - KNNs

What a good little lady ^_^
-HEE Click-

06:00:51 Kiwi

-HEE Click- None of the silver WWW wubs have gone up more than 4/6. I am so incredibly hopeful for this dude. He better not let me down lol.

05:58:41 Irish Capp

05:58:31 Irish Capp

-HEE Click- hell yeah lets go Rabi!

05:49:41 Colorful Capp

-HEE Click- hmmm

05:48:04 Loony/Loony Tune

We shall see what I have….

05:47:44 Loony/Loony Tune

Ooh okay thanks for the ideas…

05:47:06 Lily/Alpine

white whoops lolll

05:46:58 Lily/Alpine

Loony, shite or yellow!

05:45:26 Heyy it's Capp

Love when my EEE color mares go up 5/6 week 8 LOL wtf

Calela Eventing

05:45:22 Cali

Navy maybe?

05:43:10 Loony/Loony Tune

Guys please help, Tack colours….

05:41:57 Tosk's KNN

I still had to train from last week today, so he didn't have a chance to level before wk 8 but he looks rather promising !

-HEE Click-

05:40:48 Heyy it's Capp

:o I must stalk on my X account

05:40:20 Tosk's KNN

And my X boy was up 4/6 wk 7!

05:39:59 Heyy it's Capp

Damn Tosk your KNNs are killing it

05:39:57 Tosk's KNN

Wk7 * I meant

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06:03:55 Loony/Loony Tune

Hmm I think I’ll go with white…

Dash and Duchess

06:03:38 DD | ~Squizard~

Oh my god 🥹
-HEE Click-
AU!! My first since my original WWW filly ToT

Dash and Duchess

06:01:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Crossing my fingers >.< time to train!

Silver Melody Acres

06:01:47 Solar - KNNs

What a good little lady ^_^
-HEE Click-

06:00:51 Kiwi

-HEE Click- None of the silver WWW wubs have gone up more than 4/6. I am so incredibly hopeful for this dude. He better not let me down lol.

05:58:41 Irish Capp

05:58:31 Irish Capp

-HEE Click- hell yeah lets go Rabi!

05:49:41 Colorful Capp

-HEE Click- hmmm

05:48:04 Loony/Loony Tune

We shall see what I have….

05:47:44 Loony/Loony Tune

Ooh okay thanks for the ideas…

05:47:06 Lily/Alpine

white whoops lolll

05:46:58 Lily/Alpine

Loony, shite or yellow!

05:45:26 Heyy it's Capp

Love when my EEE color mares go up 5/6 week 8 LOL wtf

Calela Eventing

05:45:22 Cali

Navy maybe?

05:43:10 Loony/Loony Tune

Guys please help, Tack colours….

05:41:57 Tosk's KNN

I still had to train from last week today, so he didn't have a chance to level before wk 8 but he looks rather promising !

-HEE Click-

05:40:48 Heyy it's Capp

:o I must stalk on my X account

05:40:20 Tosk's KNN

And my X boy was up 4/6 wk 7!

05:39:59 Heyy it's Capp

Damn Tosk your KNNs are killing it

05:39:57 Tosk's KNN

Wk7 * I meant

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October 16, 2019 08:45 PM

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I'm not done yet, but any thoughts, advice, critiques, whatever on this?

https://i.postimg.cc/xjFcGg7c/sketch1571276177472.png

Edited at October 16, 2019 08:46 PM by Ankou

October 16, 2019 08:50 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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It looks really nice so far!

I love your muscle structuring in the shoulder.

My only critiques would be the neck ties in very high it should ideally connect right above the middle line in the breast area. And the head and neck look significantly too small for the rest of the body.

But accurate proportions will come with practice. :)

October 16, 2019 09:01 PM

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Thanks so much for your help! I seriously think I have a HUGE problem with the head and neck compared to the body. At least now I have a new area to focus on next time I draw. :)

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