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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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04:06:22 River

If you hover over the symbol it shows Member of JRA

Calela Eventing

04:04:00 Cali

You know when your on list view in the stables? Obviously all my horses have the M by them for Managed but one of them has this Diamond symbol???

03:53:07 Amb

I don't feel like that's something you can train. Hold a treat and hope for the best

Calela Eventing

03:52:35 Cali

Rose
Target Training works amazingly

03:35:24

Positive Reinforcement
Clicker Training
Target Training

Namerik Stables

03:26:16 Rose

Does anyone have any advice on which training I should do in order to make the horse not toss its head when I'm trying to take a photo

02:57:24

Quest:
Breed a brindle foal

Wish me luck guys

Caprina Springs

02:28:29 Mads

-HEE Click- Excited for this fella

02:10:30 Lily

Thanks so much Boulder :)

Gold Oak Estate

01:44:23 Opal's SA - AA &

Ty! And then straight after that I bred a manchado XD

01:34:23 Galaxy ☆

Oak the sooty is gorgeous!

Gold Oak Estate

01:33:00 Opal's SA - AA &

I just bred this beauty O.0
-HEE Click-

01:29:20

Tackroom - Actions - Sell Your Tack

01:22:54 Lily

where do I go to sell my used tack in the store?

MC Ace

01:20:34 McFossil

Burnt pork belly ends.

01:14:23 Galaxy ☆

If someone could help me out with this, I'd be grateful!

-HEE Click-

01:12:46 Peggy (or) Peg

I cannot do fat at all. I gag immediately on the texture lmao

01:11:36 pheezy

thornwood
not specifically cattle brands, but when my family had a much bigger horse business we used to freeze brand. does that count?

Dash and Duchess

12:58:34 DD | ~Squizard~

Flea, the endless chewing is truly the stuff of horror 😭

12:57:20 Rapcoon | Jester

omg Boulder I saw that on youtube the other day! xD

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04:06:22 River

If you hover over the symbol it shows Member of JRA

Calela Eventing

04:04:00 Cali

You know when your on list view in the stables? Obviously all my horses have the M by them for Managed but one of them has this Diamond symbol???

03:53:07 Amb

I don't feel like that's something you can train. Hold a treat and hope for the best

Calela Eventing

03:52:35 Cali

Rose
Target Training works amazingly

03:35:24

Positive Reinforcement
Clicker Training
Target Training

Namerik Stables

03:26:16 Rose

Does anyone have any advice on which training I should do in order to make the horse not toss its head when I'm trying to take a photo

02:57:24

Quest:
Breed a brindle foal

Wish me luck guys

Caprina Springs

02:28:29 Mads

-HEE Click- Excited for this fella

02:10:30 Lily

Thanks so much Boulder :)

Gold Oak Estate

01:44:23 Opal's SA - AA &

Ty! And then straight after that I bred a manchado XD

01:34:23 Galaxy ☆

Oak the sooty is gorgeous!

Gold Oak Estate

01:33:00 Opal's SA - AA &

I just bred this beauty O.0
-HEE Click-

01:29:20

Tackroom - Actions - Sell Your Tack

01:22:54 Lily

where do I go to sell my used tack in the store?

MC Ace

01:20:34 McFossil

Burnt pork belly ends.

01:14:23 Galaxy ☆

If someone could help me out with this, I'd be grateful!

-HEE Click-

01:12:46 Peggy (or) Peg

I cannot do fat at all. I gag immediately on the texture lmao

01:11:36 pheezy

thornwood
not specifically cattle brands, but when my family had a much bigger horse business we used to freeze brand. does that count?

Dash and Duchess

12:58:34 DD | ~Squizard~

Flea, the endless chewing is truly the stuff of horror 😭

12:57:20 Rapcoon | Jester

omg Boulder I saw that on youtube the other day! xD

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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