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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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12:56:17 Fantasy | Fanta

Midsummer
Well, you need to know their strengths and weaknesses before you match them.

Mentally Un-Stable

12:56:06 Chey

After. That way you can match your horses and get the best chance at a good foal

Midsummer Meadows

12:54:33

is it better to breed before training or after some training?

Mentally Un-Stable

12:53:58 Chey

*with very little training

Mentally Un-Stable

12:53:45 Chey

I forgot this girl existed lol
Matching her will very little training will be fun
-HEE Click-

Midsummer Meadows

12:53:28

I feel the natural response is black on white though

12:52:53 Fantasy | Fanta

Echo
ohhh that's rough

Midsummer Meadows

12:52:32

Tobi I have no idea but im running with it haha

12:51:57 anti gen ai

-HEE Click-
Black brindle on black 😭

Financially Stable

12:51:43 Tobi | SA

Is a zebra white with black stripes or black with white stripes Midsummer? O.o

Midsummer Meadows

12:51:36

what's the different of HEE and HEE?

Calela Eventing

12:50:47 Cali

Unlike Looney who thinks HEE is better than HEE

12:50:40 anti gen ai

Throwback to the sibling rivalry between HEE and HEE years ago

Midsummer Meadows

12:49:43

I have a zebra?!

12:49:21 Echo | River

I just went on a week long vacation and mother nature decided I should start my first period on the first day there.. great timing. T.T

Midsummer Meadows

12:48:42

12:47:33 Fantasy | Fanta

I really do think HEE is just so incredible, and HEE just... lacks.

12:46:59 Fantasy | Fanta

Cali
Ooh sounds great lol.

Financially Stable

12:46:34 Tobi | SA

Well not even HEE can out-do HEE.

Calela Eventing

12:45:04 Cali

Fanta
Me, loony, win, Ivy and Gypsy started this whole thing about how HEE is better than HEE

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12:56:17 Fantasy | Fanta

Midsummer
Well, you need to know their strengths and weaknesses before you match them.

Mentally Un-Stable

12:56:06 Chey

After. That way you can match your horses and get the best chance at a good foal

Midsummer Meadows

12:54:33

is it better to breed before training or after some training?

Mentally Un-Stable

12:53:58 Chey

*with very little training

Mentally Un-Stable

12:53:45 Chey

I forgot this girl existed lol
Matching her will very little training will be fun
-HEE Click-

Midsummer Meadows

12:53:28

I feel the natural response is black on white though

12:52:53 Fantasy | Fanta

Echo
ohhh that's rough

Midsummer Meadows

12:52:32

Tobi I have no idea but im running with it haha

12:51:57 anti gen ai

-HEE Click-
Black brindle on black 😭

Financially Stable

12:51:43 Tobi | SA

Is a zebra white with black stripes or black with white stripes Midsummer? O.o

Midsummer Meadows

12:51:36

what's the different of HEE and HEE?

Calela Eventing

12:50:47 Cali

Unlike Looney who thinks HEE is better than HEE

12:50:40 anti gen ai

Throwback to the sibling rivalry between HEE and HEE years ago

Midsummer Meadows

12:49:43

I have a zebra?!

12:49:21 Echo | River

I just went on a week long vacation and mother nature decided I should start my first period on the first day there.. great timing. T.T

Midsummer Meadows

12:48:42

12:47:33 Fantasy | Fanta

I really do think HEE is just so incredible, and HEE just... lacks.

12:46:59 Fantasy | Fanta

Cali
Ooh sounds great lol.

Financially Stable

12:46:34 Tobi | SA

Well not even HEE can out-do HEE.

Calela Eventing

12:45:04 Cali

Fanta
Me, loony, win, Ivy and Gypsy started this whole thing about how HEE is better than HEE

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December 19, 2019 05:47 PM

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December 19, 2019 05:55 PM

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Critiques or opinions definitely welcome. Advice highly appreciated and desired as well.

December 19, 2019 06:22 PM

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It looks nice. The only thing is it's hard to tell the neck and head apart. Other than that, I love it!

December 19, 2019 08:06 PM

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Overall, I really like this piece. It looks as though you used a very large brush. I would recommend that you use a smaller brush to do the small details like the eye, mane, shadowing, and highlighting. I think the main thing that would make your piece better is to really focus on shadowing and highlighting. Shadowing will held separate the head from the neck and stop them from blending together, like Nevermore stated.

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