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Ambrosia
03:18:56 Amb
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WWW AALB mare for sale!!
Aerospace Equines
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Secretariat Ranch
03:13:22 SR
Horses for sale color/rating

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MakeEm Fancy
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Clearing out inventory! Includes sexed embryos, pirate maps and sherpa maps
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Fierce Passion
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iso 1 month upgrade
Paradise Stables
02:25:59 Ariel / Tara
1. Broods for 193:
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2. #1 PONLB up for stud:
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Straw thread for 193:
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3. Check out my sales barn:
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Nightingales Ridge
02:23:57 Issy
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Cute 1/1 filly $450
Port Royal Equines
02:15:00 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
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Bravery mares and Geldings for 1k!
Nightingales Ridge
02:11:36 Issy
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Auction -
EEE-PPP Mares and foals
Fluffy's Cosy Home
01:56:03 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*EEE
*PEE combo
*Colour
*Chimera
*Rares
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*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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Critiques? November 21, 2017 11:01 PM


Casanova
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

Former Stable
 
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OMG!! Love It!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

Former Stable
 
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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM


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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!




Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!


Thanks <3
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

Former Stable
 
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how do you make art?
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:38 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:53 PM


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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)


I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:23 PM


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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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