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Minerva

03:44:38 Min

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Auction ends 6pm. All $1 start bids- lots of SD boys as well as some EEE+ geldings. Includes the 3rd place eventing futurity gelding from 192! Cheap as chips, I just feel bad FRing

03:44:16

EWW KNN stallion for stud
-HEE Click-

Alaskan Stables

03:41:37

WWE TB Stallions' final year at stud please help make his final year a great one -HEE Click-

03:24:59

Looking to buy a upgrade

03:20:33

For sale will lower
-HEE Click-

Metla

03:05:45

1/1 PEE brindle mare with splash white and rabicano, 4yo, unbred this year. 12k
-HEE Click-

02:47:33

The Pretty Pony Pageant Needs You!!!

-Click-

02:45:36 Amb

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#50 PONLB stud for sale. Pm offers, no trades

02:11:48 Lily

Auction ending in 45 minutes! EEE/EWE mares and peacock geldings for low bids
-HEE Click-

Exo-K

01:56:31 Exo/EK

Check out my shop everything is at least 50% off and for today only 50% off good customer discount!

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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