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07:42:22 Ivy / poison ivy

Bye again xp

07:41:31 Ivy / poison ivy

Backioooss

Seagrape Stables

07:39:11 Secret Capp

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07:36:44

I didn’t know this was a brindle when I bought him lol
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Seagrape Stables

07:35:19 Secret Capp

She will for sure! LOL Im loving all the color in the TBs now!

07:35:02 Ana / Van

Merry
No problem! Its like a stronger wk 7, but my WWW mare only had two up so yours is definitely great!

07:34:48 Merry

I am crossing my fingers so hard that she makes the TBLB

07:34:47 Colorful Capp

Gelding training is irrelevant. They train faster than breeding horses

07:34:15

Is that an average week 11?
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07:33:41 Colorful Capp

Eep since it beat her week 7, always good IMO when they gain bars

07:33:19 Merry

Thanks Ana! I always forget what week 11s should be haha

07:33:10 Colorful Capp

Merry - it sure is! Congrats

07:32:44 Colorful Capp

Moonrise yes. wilds tend to have strong training. Her production will prove better than training....

Embervale Acres

07:32:19 Solar Phoenix

Umm...never seen a bloody shoulder quite like this?
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And thanks, Ana! I hope they do great for you, I love the more chill SD breeding lol

07:32:14 Ana / Van

Moonrise
A very good one yes!

Moonrise Stables

07:31:37

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is this a good week 4?

07:31:24

Is that average for a gelding?
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07:30:58 Ana / Van

Merry
Yeah!

07:30:33 Merry

That's a decent week 11 right? -HEE Click-

07:30:02 Ana / Van

Solar
Looking good! I started yesterday on SD Thoroughbreds :)

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07:42:22 Ivy / poison ivy

Bye again xp

07:41:31 Ivy / poison ivy

Backioooss

Seagrape Stables

07:39:11 Secret Capp

-HEE Click- ouuu

07:36:44

I didn’t know this was a brindle when I bought him lol
-HEE Click-

Seagrape Stables

07:35:19 Secret Capp

She will for sure! LOL Im loving all the color in the TBs now!

07:35:02 Ana / Van

Merry
No problem! Its like a stronger wk 7, but my WWW mare only had two up so yours is definitely great!

07:34:48 Merry

I am crossing my fingers so hard that she makes the TBLB

07:34:47 Colorful Capp

Gelding training is irrelevant. They train faster than breeding horses

07:34:15

Is that an average week 11?
-HEE Click-

07:33:41 Colorful Capp

Eep since it beat her week 7, always good IMO when they gain bars

07:33:19 Merry

Thanks Ana! I always forget what week 11s should be haha

07:33:10 Colorful Capp

Merry - it sure is! Congrats

07:32:44 Colorful Capp

Moonrise yes. wilds tend to have strong training. Her production will prove better than training....

Embervale Acres

07:32:19 Solar Phoenix

Umm...never seen a bloody shoulder quite like this?
-HEE Click-

And thanks, Ana! I hope they do great for you, I love the more chill SD breeding lol

07:32:14 Ana / Van

Moonrise
A very good one yes!

Moonrise Stables

07:31:37

-HEE Click-
is this a good week 4?

07:31:24

Is that average for a gelding?
-HEE Click-

07:30:58 Ana / Van

Merry
Yeah!

07:30:33 Merry

That's a decent week 11 right? -HEE Click-

07:30:02 Ana / Van

Solar
Looking good! I started yesterday on SD Thoroughbreds :)

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June 22, 2018 05:17 PM

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Edited at May 1, 2019 02:51 PM by Equity Falls

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June 22, 2018 05:20 PM

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The back is a little rough, maybe you can smooth the way that the back is shaped? Looks really good so far though!

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June 22, 2018 05:24 PM

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BT21 Stables said:
The back is a little rough, maybe you can smooth the way that the back is shaped? Looks really good so far though!

What on the back is rough? So I know what to edit :) the withers? The back? The loin? The croupe?

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June 22, 2018 05:28 PM

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This looks great! Except that there is no apparent light source, unless someone is shining a light onto the horse, to make it look like that. You can use a burn tool to make the horse darker.

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June 22, 2018 05:36 PM

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Celestial Estates said:
This looks great! Except that there is no apparent light source, unless someone is shining a light onto the horse, to make it look like that. You can use a burn tool to make the horse darker.

I plan on adding one in the top left :D and thanks! I don't use the burn tool unless it's on the color layer, but I have ways >:3

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June 22, 2018 05:40 PM

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It will be amazing if you add in a flashy blue eye!

Beautiful work by the way

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June 22, 2018 06:09 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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I think this is awful.

You should just give it to me....

and try again. :P<3

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June 22, 2018 07:13 PM

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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think this is awful.

You should just give it to me....
and try again. :P<3

Deal! Lol kidding <3 Thanks Jelly-Oh

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