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Angels angels
09:40:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yesss I got her! The owner was willing to come down a little *-*
-HEE Click-
Canterwood Acres
09:40:28 Canter
oooh can I see?
Glacier Bay Cove
09:34:32 Arctic Katz
She is gorgeous, Angels
Ivy League Acres
09:34:04 Ivy - your slay one
angel

i know it's not much but....
Glacier Bay Cove
09:32:09 Arctic Katz
You can PM me and I will look her up
Angels angels
09:31:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
But it is a homo tobi TB mare
Niallator Acres
09:31:20 Ivy - Niallator side
hi angel
Angels angels
09:31:18 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I can't link her she is for sale
Glacier Bay Cove
09:30:50 Arctic Katz
Which mare, Angels
Angels angels
09:28:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
There is a mare for sale I want so dang bad but it would take all my ebs lol
Wisteria Run Farm
09:25:56 Solar/Ria
Good morning ^_^
Niallator Acres
09:25:10 Ivy - Niallator side
hi myth, anna canter, and solar
Mythological
09:20:22 Crowley
Carmine Diego šŸ˜‚
Sweet Valley
09:17:10 Anna/Jewel
Carmine Splash
Sweet Valley
09:16:56 Anna/Jewel
-Click-

Sometimes i use this for names but
Canterwood Acres
09:15:37 Canter
I like carmine but not sure about the requiem part
Sweet Valley
09:14:02 Anna/Jewel
Rainy Skies
"Skye"

Sweet Valley
09:13:30 Anna/Jewel
Canter-

Splashy Remembrance

Splashy Song

Splashy Miracle

Embervale Acres
09:10:56 Solar Phoenix
Carmine is a shade of red, and requiem is a song or token of remembrance
Mythological
09:09:59 Crowley
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Angels angels
09:40:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yesss I got her! The owner was willing to come down a little *-*
-HEE Click-
Canterwood Acres
09:40:28 Canter
oooh can I see?
Glacier Bay Cove
09:34:32 Arctic Katz
She is gorgeous, Angels
Ivy League Acres
09:34:04 Ivy - your slay one
angel

i know it's not much but....
Glacier Bay Cove
09:32:09 Arctic Katz
You can PM me and I will look her up
Angels angels
09:31:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
But it is a homo tobi TB mare
Niallator Acres
09:31:20 Ivy - Niallator side
hi angel
Angels angels
09:31:18 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I can't link her she is for sale
Glacier Bay Cove
09:30:50 Arctic Katz
Which mare, Angels
Angels angels
09:28:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
There is a mare for sale I want so dang bad but it would take all my ebs lol
Wisteria Run Farm
09:25:56 Solar/Ria
Good morning ^_^
Niallator Acres
09:25:10 Ivy - Niallator side
hi myth, anna canter, and solar
Mythological
09:20:22 Crowley
Carmine Diego šŸ˜‚
Sweet Valley
09:17:10 Anna/Jewel
Carmine Splash
Sweet Valley
09:16:56 Anna/Jewel
-Click-

Sometimes i use this for names but
Canterwood Acres
09:15:37 Canter
I like carmine but not sure about the requiem part
Sweet Valley
09:14:02 Anna/Jewel
Rainy Skies
"Skye"

Sweet Valley
09:13:30 Anna/Jewel
Canter-

Splashy Remembrance

Splashy Song

Splashy Miracle

Embervale Acres
09:10:56 Solar Phoenix
Carmine is a shade of red, and requiem is a song or token of remembrance
Mythological
09:09:59 Crowley
Heyo

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! IĀ’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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