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Sweet Valley
12:29:16 Anna/Jewel
Loony- I was going to message you and say perhaps you'd better get another upgrade lol. I just realized ur free now
Sweet Valley
12:28:33 Anna/Jewel
Yes, I know! I do not know for how long the Upgrade is for, but I just want them to know I appreciate it!
Lunalovegood
12:28:32 Loony/Loony Tune
Anna that was kind of them, Wish they would do that for me XD
Bioshock Manor
12:26:03 Storm
They were kind
Sweet Valley
12:23:25 Anna/Jewel
Some very kind person anonymously gifted me Premium Upgrade. I want to thank whoever that was!
Milo Ridge
12:22:38 Milo | KNN Breeder
Lightning
I know! I've been thinking on putting it in the suggestion box.
That and merging items
pandemoniu_m
12:22:15 pheezy
okay phew thank you
ArcticLights
12:21:30 Ceci / (Call me) AL
pheezy yes
pandemoniu_m
12:20:56 pheezy
can embryo matches use items?
pandemoniu_m
12:20:40 pheezy
i just grind them for credits so im not paying for all my items out of pocket
Lightning L Ranch
12:20:22 
Thank you Milo, I did just need more. Wish the recipe would tell you exactly how many of the item lol.
Bioshock Manor
12:18:18 Storm
Quests don't pay anything anymore. So I don't even bother
Santana Rising
12:14:54 San
Can't wait to skip this dumb gelding quest tomorrow. Let's hope I can at least finish this bravery one today.
pandemoniu_m
12:12:38 pheezy
okay thank you AL,
i'll either do that or dressage
ArcticLights
12:10:27 Ceci / (Call me) AL
pheezy, I would add movement if I didnt use filly item
pandemoniu_m
12:08:39 pheezy
-HEE Click-
would this match be okay? does it need an item?
ArcticLights
12:06:05 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Receipe asks for "normal" detergent unless its a bug in receipe
Santana Rising
12:04:49 San
Is it super detergent maybe?
Lunalovegood
12:04:21 Loony/Loony Tune
Soz to those who replied to me, I zoned out
Milo Ridge
12:04:15 Milo | KNN Breeder
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Sweet Valley
12:29:16 Anna/Jewel
Loony- I was going to message you and say perhaps you'd better get another upgrade lol. I just realized ur free now
Sweet Valley
12:28:33 Anna/Jewel
Yes, I know! I do not know for how long the Upgrade is for, but I just want them to know I appreciate it!
Lunalovegood
12:28:32 Loony/Loony Tune
Anna that was kind of them, Wish they would do that for me XD
Bioshock Manor
12:26:03 Storm
They were kind
Sweet Valley
12:23:25 Anna/Jewel
Some very kind person anonymously gifted me Premium Upgrade. I want to thank whoever that was!
Milo Ridge
12:22:38 Milo | KNN Breeder
Lightning
I know! I've been thinking on putting it in the suggestion box.
That and merging items
pandemoniu_m
12:22:15 pheezy
okay phew thank you
ArcticLights
12:21:30 Ceci / (Call me) AL
pheezy yes
pandemoniu_m
12:20:56 pheezy
can embryo matches use items?
pandemoniu_m
12:20:40 pheezy
i just grind them for credits so im not paying for all my items out of pocket
Lightning L Ranch
12:20:22 
Thank you Milo, I did just need more. Wish the recipe would tell you exactly how many of the item lol.
Bioshock Manor
12:18:18 Storm
Quests don't pay anything anymore. So I don't even bother
Santana Rising
12:14:54 San
Can't wait to skip this dumb gelding quest tomorrow. Let's hope I can at least finish this bravery one today.
pandemoniu_m
12:12:38 pheezy
okay thank you AL,
i'll either do that or dressage
ArcticLights
12:10:27 Ceci / (Call me) AL
pheezy, I would add movement if I didnt use filly item
pandemoniu_m
12:08:39 pheezy
-HEE Click-
would this match be okay? does it need an item?
ArcticLights
12:06:05 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Receipe asks for "normal" detergent unless its a bug in receipe
Santana Rising
12:04:49 San
Is it super detergent maybe?
Lunalovegood
12:04:21 Loony/Loony Tune
Soz to those who replied to me, I zoned out
Milo Ridge
12:04:15 Milo | KNN Breeder
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Critiques? November 30, 2019 10:34 PM

Vintage valley
 
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Heyo! So, recently, my shop has been filling up quite fast, and I've gotten alot of PMs saying that I should up my prices. But first, I would love some criticism! This is my most recent. Currently, my prices are at 15k for a Horse Avatar.

https://i.postimg.cc/PJ5fRyd7/Untitled176-20191130212824.png

Also, I would like some tips on how to make white markings! Thank you so much

Critiques? November 30, 2019 10:44 PM

Former Stable
 
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the white markings look great! Just make sure to add a bit of pink where needed, for example a tiny bit on the nose.

The horse is a bit too smudged out and so is the tail. The mane looks quite good though!

Try adding some highlights and lowlights to the horses body ;)

also keep in mind lighting, the lighting is coming from behind the horse, so keep that in mind when making the piece.
Critiques? November 30, 2019 10:46 PM

Vintage valley
 
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Cassa Belle said:
the white markings look great! Just make sure to add a bit of pink where needed, for example a tiny bit on the nose.

The horse is a bit too smudged out and so is the tail. The mane looks quite good though!

Try adding some highlights and lowlights to the horses body ;)

also keep in mind lighting, the lighting is coming from behind the horse, so keep that in mind when making the piece.



Okay, thank you! This will be super helpful :D

Edited at November 30, 2019 10:46 PM by Ethereal Eventers
Critiques? November 30, 2019 10:49 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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Fantastic job!

First thing I noticed is the stiffness of the hair. The mane and tail have a natural flow the them and will wave around, not stick straight out. Try to incorporate that movement.

The light source is also behind the horse, from the sun, so try and add some light hitting the horse from the back.

The spot where the legs flow into the grass seems a bit rough. Try making it a bit more natural by having a sharper cut with several strands of grass visibly covering the leg, not just a blob of leg and a blob of grass.

Since the horse is the focus of the avatar, try to blur out the backdrop a bit. The sharp clouds take a lot away from the subject.

Keep in mind the horse would also be casting a shadow on the ground from the sun.

I think you're on the right track though! Great work! :)

Edited at November 30, 2019 10:56 PM by Amera Eventing
Critiques? December 1, 2019 07:13 AM

Vintage valley
 
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Amera Eventing said:
Fantastic job!

First thing I noticed is the stiffness of the hair. The mane and tail have a natural flow the them and will wave around, not stick straight out. Try to incorporate that movement.

The light source is also behind the horse, from the sun, so try and add some light hitting the horse from the back.

The spot where the legs flow into the grass seems a bit rough. Try making it a bit more natural by having a sharper cut with several strands of grass visibly covering the leg, not just a blob of leg and a blob of grass.

Since the horse is the focus of the avatar, try to blur out the backdrop a bit. The sharp clouds take a lot away from the subject.

Keep in mind the horse would also be casting a shadow on the ground from the sun.

I think you're on the right track though! Great work! :)


Haha, thank you! I'll be trying a few pieces with this criticism.
Critiques? December 3, 2019 05:32 PM


Moonglade Manor
 
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You NEED to go a tier higher!!

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