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11:28:31 C

Roan, you're welcome :)

11:25:00 Roan🦋⃤

thank youu!

11:24:46 C

Roan, she's super pretty.

11:24:44 Roan🦋⃤

Palomino,

I do as well, shes beautiful!

Palomino Meadow

11:24:08

Love her color, Tree!

11:23:22 Roan🦋⃤

look at this baby, so happy with her!
-HEE Click-

Palomino Meadow

11:21:02

Thank you guys!!

11:20:25

@Palomino Meadow
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11:19:46 C

Pal, you can find it in the store, you can buy it from other stables, or you can craft it.

11:19:39

Palomino middle I think you find it in the store and then items

Palomino Meadow

11:19:29

Wow!! That's a pretty mare Aqua

11:17:44

Look what SUNNI gave me she is my featured horse

Palomino Meadow

11:15:47

where do I find Fertilizer? its for a quest

Glacier Bay Cove

11:12:17 Arctic Katz

Oh too late

Glacier Bay Cove

11:12:00 Arctic Katz

Broken link when she grows up, Firefly

Firefly Forrest

11:01:09

Allright got to go

10:59:46

My COLT is now my future horse he is so pretty

10:56:30

he is in my den

Firefly Forrest

10:56:23

hmm maybe...

10:55:56

What do you think about my new baby the gorilla to be no colt

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11:28:31 C

Roan, you're welcome :)

11:25:00 Roan🦋⃤

thank youu!

11:24:46 C

Roan, she's super pretty.

11:24:44 Roan🦋⃤

Palomino,

I do as well, shes beautiful!

Palomino Meadow

11:24:08

Love her color, Tree!

11:23:22 Roan🦋⃤

look at this baby, so happy with her!
-HEE Click-

Palomino Meadow

11:21:02

Thank you guys!!

11:20:25

@Palomino Meadow
You can find items in the Store - Services - Store - Items
or Member Stores
Search - Search Items and Decor
Check the Hidden Falls

Or ask if someone has one to borrow in Sales

11:19:46 C

Pal, you can find it in the store, you can buy it from other stables, or you can craft it.

11:19:39

Palomino middle I think you find it in the store and then items

Palomino Meadow

11:19:29

Wow!! That's a pretty mare Aqua

11:17:44

Look what SUNNI gave me she is my featured horse

Palomino Meadow

11:15:47

where do I find Fertilizer? its for a quest

Glacier Bay Cove

11:12:17 Arctic Katz

Oh too late

Glacier Bay Cove

11:12:00 Arctic Katz

Broken link when she grows up, Firefly

Firefly Forrest

11:01:09

Allright got to go

10:59:46

My COLT is now my future horse he is so pretty

10:56:30

he is in my den

Firefly Forrest

10:56:23

hmm maybe...

10:55:56

What do you think about my new baby the gorilla to be no colt

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October 16, 2019 08:45 PM

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I'm not done yet, but any thoughts, advice, critiques, whatever on this?

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Edited at October 16, 2019 08:46 PM by Ankou

October 16, 2019 08:50 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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It looks really nice so far!

I love your muscle structuring in the shoulder.

My only critiques would be the neck ties in very high it should ideally connect right above the middle line in the breast area. And the head and neck look significantly too small for the rest of the body.

But accurate proportions will come with practice. :)

October 16, 2019 09:01 PM

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Thanks so much for your help! I seriously think I have a HUGE problem with the head and neck compared to the body. At least now I have a new area to focus on next time I draw. :)

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