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Black Bean Stables

12:21:20 Sam

WC + Elite bravery up for auction.
(RID, KNN, SH)
LB mares and trained explorers included:

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Port Royal Equines

12:11:30 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale

-HEE Click-
PPP+ Brave mares. 1-2k

-HEE Click-
EEE mares for sale! 1/1 colors included. 7-10k

-HEE Click-
Lvl 4+ geldings for sale! 1-3k

-HEE Click-
Shiney EWW ISH broods. 194. Embryo & LC.

Golden Rose

12:08:05 Rose

WEP + 20 TB mare, Liver Chestnut Sabino Frame Brindle. Open to offers :)

-HEE Click-

Horse Haven Stables

11:32:08 HHS⎹ Lyla

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WWE SH Stallion for sale! 6 years old, Silver brown dun. 125k or PM me offers!

Skyrim

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Meraki Manor

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Critiques?

October 16, 2019 08:45 PM

Former Stable

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I'm not done yet, but any thoughts, advice, critiques, whatever on this?

https://i.postimg.cc/xjFcGg7c/sketch1571276177472.png

Edited at October 16, 2019 08:46 PM by Ankou

Critiques?

October 16, 2019 08:50 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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It looks really nice so far!

I love your muscle structuring in the shoulder.

My only critiques would be the neck ties in very high it should ideally connect right above the middle line in the breast area. And the head and neck look significantly too small for the rest of the body.

But accurate proportions will come with practice. :)

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October 16, 2019 09:01 PM

Former Stable

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Thanks so much for your help! I seriously think I have a HUGE problem with the head and neck compared to the body. At least now I have a new area to focus on next time I draw. :)

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