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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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Black Meadow Estate

01:13:12 Meadow

spd glass it is then

01:10:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Meadow
Spd glass

Quill Fern Estates

01:09:47 Quillie~Quill~Quin

-HEE Click-
here she is! What should I call her? :3

Black Meadow Estate

01:09:08 Meadow

-HEE Click- what item should i use for this match?

Quill Fern Estates

01:07:45 Quillie~Quill~Quin

I just bred my first PEE! I'm so happy

01:04:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Bird
Ebs are always nice but no I have plenty I just don't want to spend so much at one time xD

Dash and Duchess

12:57:38 DD | ~Squizard~

Angel, you got this! Just dont pay attention to the loss :')

Hummingbird Meadows

12:57:30 Bird

@Angels, strength or EBs? XD

12:56:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Someone give me thr strength to buy the sven I need xD

Rising Stars Stable

12:54:50 Willow ~ AA Breeder

I have to go, bye

I'm so glad he has settled in

Hummingbird Meadows

12:53:51 Bird

Thankfully it came out in the wash. I was worried because the blanket was white. I also wiped his paws off before he licked any.

Rising Stars Stable

12:53:01 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Bird
Awww

Hummingbird Meadows

12:52:40 Bird

@Willow, yesterday I was eating Nutella toast in my bed and he jumped up and landed on my toast. I had chocolate paw prints on my blanket. >.<

God is Mighty Stable

12:50:36 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Bird
How is he so cute?

Hummingbird Meadows

12:50:07 Bird

@Angels, I think it looks uncomfortable. XD

12:48:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Bird
My dog will do that lol

Hummingbird Meadows

12:45:43 Bird

I think Finley likes being squished. He just climbed into a pillow case with a pillow in it.
-Click-

12:44:23 Ivy / poison ivy

free stable

thanks

12:44:14

so cuteee

12:41:28 Ivy / poison ivy

angel

thank you so much for telling me to invest in a mare -HEE Click-

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Black Meadow Estate

01:13:12 Meadow

spd glass it is then

01:10:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Meadow
Spd glass

Quill Fern Estates

01:09:47 Quillie~Quill~Quin

-HEE Click-
here she is! What should I call her? :3

Black Meadow Estate

01:09:08 Meadow

-HEE Click- what item should i use for this match?

Quill Fern Estates

01:07:45 Quillie~Quill~Quin

I just bred my first PEE! I'm so happy

01:04:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Bird
Ebs are always nice but no I have plenty I just don't want to spend so much at one time xD

Dash and Duchess

12:57:38 DD | ~Squizard~

Angel, you got this! Just dont pay attention to the loss :')

Hummingbird Meadows

12:57:30 Bird

@Angels, strength or EBs? XD

12:56:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Someone give me thr strength to buy the sven I need xD

Rising Stars Stable

12:54:50 Willow ~ AA Breeder

I have to go, bye

I'm so glad he has settled in

Hummingbird Meadows

12:53:51 Bird

Thankfully it came out in the wash. I was worried because the blanket was white. I also wiped his paws off before he licked any.

Rising Stars Stable

12:53:01 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Bird
Awww

Hummingbird Meadows

12:52:40 Bird

@Willow, yesterday I was eating Nutella toast in my bed and he jumped up and landed on my toast. I had chocolate paw prints on my blanket. >.<

God is Mighty Stable

12:50:36 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Bird
How is he so cute?

Hummingbird Meadows

12:50:07 Bird

@Angels, I think it looks uncomfortable. XD

12:48:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Bird
My dog will do that lol

Hummingbird Meadows

12:45:43 Bird

I think Finley likes being squished. He just climbed into a pillow case with a pillow in it.
-Click-

12:44:23 Ivy / poison ivy

free stable

thanks

12:44:14

so cuteee

12:41:28 Ivy / poison ivy

angel

thank you so much for telling me to invest in a mare -HEE Click-

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January 20, 2020 02:26 PM

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I've been doing a bit of art lafter watching jellos join.me, so I would love for people to critique it! (Mods, will not be sold, auctioned, or used.)

January 20, 2020 02:29 PM

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I'm no artist, but maybe more contrast in the first? They all are so lovely!

January 20, 2020 02:31 PM

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Mysterious Echoes said:

I'm no artist, but maybe more contrast in the first? They all are so lovely!

Thank you!

January 21, 2020 03:16 PM

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For the second one, the shadow doesn't seem to line up right with the light source. These are all beautiful, though, absolutely lovely.

January 21, 2020 04:43 PM

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White Crown Stables said:

For the second one, the shadow doesn't seem to line up right with the light source. These are all beautiful, though, absolutely lovely.

Thank you! I'll remember that on my next piece.

January 21, 2020 04:47 PM

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I would also love critique on this piece

February 3, 2020 12:03 AM

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personally i would go thicker on some strands of hair and just keep practicing hair movement. For me i like to go on youtube and search horses in slow motion so i can see the way their hair moves in different ways:) your art is gorgeous though and i love the concepts

February 3, 2020 12:04 AM

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also if youre interested i would LOVE to do a collab with you:DDD

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