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Port Royal Equines
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Leveled and Starting geldings for sale!

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New stuff in shop!
The Lazy Ninja
11:46:11 Jessie
WEE 1/3 mare with frame blanket appy and splash 45k obo
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Sweet Valley
11:43:45 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
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1/1 filly

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EPP filly

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EEP stallion
Amethyst Ranch
11:22:52 Echo <3
Golden Sunset art auction
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Silver Heart
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Golden Heart
11:19:45 Gold
Selling straws of two of my EWW's!!! 50k each! PM to claim them, there's only 5 per stud!!!
Whispering Wood Barn
11:18:03 ~Whispy~
2nd Embryo For This Year, 193 is still available for use! 130k. Message me to claim!

WWW Studs Only, just match well is all I ask!

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Black Stone Creek
11:12:45 Dolly / Ace
KNN barn clean out
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Gem
11:03:19 Tier 1 Artist
Art rumble auction!! Bigsby - T1 winner <3
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W SD boys for auction - RID and KNN, all disciplines. Some LB or previously LB! Plus some great color to add to your SD lines ^^
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Daybreak
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EEE TB mare for brood.
With a pretty Golden Bay.
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Port Royal Equines
11:47:18 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Leveled and Starting geldings for sale!

-HEE Click-
New stuff in shop!
The Lazy Ninja
11:46:11 Jessie
WEE 1/3 mare with frame blanket appy and splash 45k obo
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
11:43:45 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
-HEE Click-
1/1 filly

-HEE Click-
EPP filly

-HEE Click-
EEP stallion
Amethyst Ranch
11:22:52 Echo <3
Golden Sunset art auction
-HEE Click-
Silver Heart
11:20:09 High Ho Silver Awayy
(Mail this account lol)
Golden Heart
11:19:45 Gold
Selling straws of two of my EWW's!!! 50k each! PM to claim them, there's only 5 per stud!!!
Whispering Wood Barn
11:18:03 ~Whispy~
2nd Embryo For This Year, 193 is still available for use! 130k. Message me to claim!

WWW Studs Only, just match well is all I ask!

-HEE Click-
Black Stone Creek
11:12:45 Dolly / Ace
KNN barn clean out
-HEE Click-
Gem
11:03:19 Tier 1 Artist
Art rumble auction!! Bigsby - T1 winner <3
-HEE Click-

W SD boys for auction - RID and KNN, all disciplines. Some LB or previously LB! Plus some great color to add to your SD lines ^^
-HEE Click-
Daybreak
10:47:21 
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EEE TB mare for brood.
With a pretty Golden Bay.
$5'000

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Critique July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png
Wondering what I could do next time to improve.
I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?
Critique July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.
Critique July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png
Critique July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png


Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image
Critique July 31, 2018 04:25 AM


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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they don’t taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)
Critique July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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