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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Insignia Elites

09:41:33 Em

WWW SH Freshman! Please match and test! -HEE Click-

Cloverleaf Castle

09:36:38 KNN

WWW Producing! WWW Grullo KNN - great foals so far - -HEE Click-

Corazon

09:32:20

-HEE Click-

WWW KNN needs testing

Blueberry Ledge

09:31:11

-HEE Click-

Rares up for auction!
Brindles
Chimera
Peacock
Manchado
Sootys

Insignia Elites

09:28:50 Em

Rusty bits in shop
-HEE Click-

09:09:25 Night

Lots of horses for sale and up for brood in my barns! All EEE+ with fun colors!

09:05:46

EEE RID boy needs testing
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500ebs/cover

Bermuda Triangle

09:04:27 Lost

Auction

-HEE Click-

Eee-www mares

Cloverleaf Castle

08:58:37 KNN

Looking to add some spots to your herd?
-HEE Click-

The Fallen Rulers

08:57:27 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Anyone interested in a couple W CC SD RID fillies? Off LB lines. I normally never let any go.

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Insignia Elites

09:41:33 Em

WWW SH Freshman! Please match and test! -HEE Click-

Cloverleaf Castle

09:36:38 KNN

WWW Producing! WWW Grullo KNN - great foals so far - -HEE Click-

Corazon

09:32:20

-HEE Click-

WWW KNN needs testing

Blueberry Ledge

09:31:11

-HEE Click-

Rares up for auction!
Brindles
Chimera
Peacock
Manchado
Sootys

Insignia Elites

09:28:50 Em

Rusty bits in shop
-HEE Click-

09:09:25 Night

Lots of horses for sale and up for brood in my barns! All EEE+ with fun colors!

09:05:46

EEE RID boy needs testing
-HEE Click-
500ebs/cover

Bermuda Triangle

09:04:27 Lost

Auction

-HEE Click-

Eee-www mares

Cloverleaf Castle

08:58:37 KNN

Looking to add some spots to your herd?
-HEE Click-

The Fallen Rulers

08:57:27 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Anyone interested in a couple W CC SD RID fillies? Off LB lines. I normally never let any go.

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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