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Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Sleepwalker Centre

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EWE & WEE WB Colts - 100ebs each

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SD W colts 1k
SD W filly 3k
EEE fillies 8k
EWE mares 30-50k
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Strength Stained glass horse for sale in my shop! 95k!

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WWW mare for auction

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06:45:44 ZEZ - ZZ

Clearing out EEE mares and an Unbred Brindle mare
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Bermuda Triangle

07:10:19 Lost

Auction in progress
Eew-www well bred mares

-HEE Click-

Sleepwalker Centre

07:09:12 Walker

You'll never guess what's for sale in my sale barn (it's... horses!) -HEE Click-

07:06:01 Louix

-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
EWE & WEE WB Colts - 100ebs each

Green River Stables

06:52:35

Looking for someone who does pallets, pm me please

06:51:33 Will Buy Brindles!!

-HEE Click-
SD W colts 1k
SD W filly 3k
EEE fillies 8k
EWE mares 30-50k
Need all gone, various breeds, pm to lower!

Horse Haven Stables

06:47:59 HHS⎹ Lyla

-HEE Click-
Strength Stained glass horse for sale in my shop! 95k!

06:46:55 Magic

-HEE Click-
WWW mare for auction

06:46:00 Senda

colorful most 1K all rated
-HEE Click-

06:45:44 ZEZ - ZZ

Clearing out EEE mares and an Unbred Brindle mare
Auction ends Tuesday
-HEE Click-

Insignia Elites

06:28:45 Em

Rusty bits In shop! -HEE Click-

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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