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The Old Gods

07:32:36 Void Malign

One horse gets thrush spray and the other gets iodine.. Oklahoma was naughty and got tapped on the chest with a crop. She bonked her head on the feeder lmfao. Started listening after that

Bioshock Manor

07:30:37 Storm

I sprayed the silver meds on my arm today. It's still there.

ghost light stables

07:30:19 moldy bread / ghost

Do we have any horsemanship/horse training people online I need any advice I can get

Glacier Bay Cove

07:30:16 Arctic Katz

Bioshock Manor

07:30:07 Storm

Ah yes. That does it

The Old Gods

07:29:53 Void Malign

iodine and thrush spray

Bioshock Manor

07:29:28 Storm

Lol why?

Glacier Bay Cove

07:29:28 Arctic Katz

Why, Void

The Old Gods

07:23:39 Void Malign

my hands are now stained blue and a vaguely bruised color lol

Bioshock Manor

07:09:24 Storm

Sunny may want to block out the tag and address on your pictures.

Black Meadow Estate

07:08:28 Meadow

anna not really 80K is nothing now days on HEE i use to do upgrades for 150K and that dosent last anymore so no 90K is fair game if your paying real money on hee

Sunni

07:07:28 Sunni bunny

Rose normally I have good luck, this time apparently not.
I waited until I was outside the address.
Just being stupid I guess.

Bioshock Manor

07:07:12 Storm

Can't stand Chime

Bioshock Manor

07:06:59 Storm

I dont pay until I see the product, anything it may be. I have the right to refuse it too

Sunni

07:06:39 Sunni bunny

Storm I should have, I used chime.

Golden Rose

07:06:21 Rose

I never get why people pay for something that they're picking up. I never pay in anything other than cash when buying from marketplace. Unless I'm getting something posted, then I thoroughly check their profile etc. 9/10 you can pick a scammer

Bioshock Manor

07:06:09 Storm

Also, doing online things like that through PayPal is a better guarantee of money being returned.

Sweet Valley

07:06:04 Anna/Jewel

Yeah I know, but still. I have 30k saved up.

Sunni

07:05:39 Sunni bunny

Storm I have their banking locked now tho, they can't even touch the money.

Sunni

07:05:12 Sunni bunny

I told them I was here, and they were coming outside.
That was a lie I should have waited XC

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The Old Gods

07:32:36 Void Malign

One horse gets thrush spray and the other gets iodine.. Oklahoma was naughty and got tapped on the chest with a crop. She bonked her head on the feeder lmfao. Started listening after that

Bioshock Manor

07:30:37 Storm

I sprayed the silver meds on my arm today. It's still there.

ghost light stables

07:30:19 moldy bread / ghost

Do we have any horsemanship/horse training people online I need any advice I can get

Glacier Bay Cove

07:30:16 Arctic Katz

Bioshock Manor

07:30:07 Storm

Ah yes. That does it

The Old Gods

07:29:53 Void Malign

iodine and thrush spray

Bioshock Manor

07:29:28 Storm

Lol why?

Glacier Bay Cove

07:29:28 Arctic Katz

Why, Void

The Old Gods

07:23:39 Void Malign

my hands are now stained blue and a vaguely bruised color lol

Bioshock Manor

07:09:24 Storm

Sunny may want to block out the tag and address on your pictures.

Black Meadow Estate

07:08:28 Meadow

anna not really 80K is nothing now days on HEE i use to do upgrades for 150K and that dosent last anymore so no 90K is fair game if your paying real money on hee

Sunni

07:07:28 Sunni bunny

Rose normally I have good luck, this time apparently not.
I waited until I was outside the address.
Just being stupid I guess.

Bioshock Manor

07:07:12 Storm

Can't stand Chime

Bioshock Manor

07:06:59 Storm

I dont pay until I see the product, anything it may be. I have the right to refuse it too

Sunni

07:06:39 Sunni bunny

Storm I should have, I used chime.

Golden Rose

07:06:21 Rose

Bioshock Manor

07:06:09 Storm

Also, doing online things like that through PayPal is a better guarantee of money being returned.

Sweet Valley

07:06:04 Anna/Jewel

Yeah I know, but still. I have 30k saved up.

Sunni

07:05:39 Sunni bunny

Storm I have their banking locked now tho, they can't even touch the money.

Sunni

07:05:12 Sunni bunny

I told them I was here, and they were coming outside.
That was a lie I should have waited XC

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Critique

July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

Former Stable

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

Fox Crest Manor

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

Critique

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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