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ShiningStar Stables

11:56:57 Chey / Star

Blue
I was so excited to get her from the auction!
I love seals as well

11:56:16 ⛈ whisper/lynx

Em
let's go another canadian :D

Bluebonnet Estates

11:55:16 Blue ~ Poodle Rat

Chey
Oo that's really good! I may have to kidnap her, I adore seals LOL

ShiningStar Stables

11:53:26 Chey / Star

I'm so happy with this week 7! Plus, I can actually match her now
-HEE Click-

11:52:25 sav

-HEE Click-

She looses her little shoulder spots as an adult :(

Sunni

11:52:18 Sunni bunny

I just put one up Lily,

Insignia Elites

11:51:56 Em

Thats so cool :)

Fossil's Dreams

11:51:50 PK or Fossil

*waves goodbye*
I've got to go RL calls-dangit

11:51:10 Rapcoon | Jester

em
I think the majority are in the US, but I do know of many in australia, the UK, new zealand, for example

11:50:58 sav

NC, USA

Glacier Bay Cove

11:50:53 Arctic Katz

Las Vegas, Nevada

11:50:40 Lily/Alpine

Sunni
thank you! Put one up and I'll join :D

Insignia Elites

11:50:35 Em

Im Canadian

Fossil's Dreams

11:50:28 PK or Fossil

I am from the Ohio Valley of the United States

Sunni

11:50:21 Sunni bunny

Am north Carolina

11:50:15 Lily/Alpine

sav
lace pattern, I believe

11:49:59 Lily/Alpine

Em
I'm from South Africa :)

Glacier Bay Cove

11:49:57 Arctic Katz

Bird catcher spots and lace, awesome

Fossil's Dreams

11:49:49 PK or Fossil

God is univeral, like OMG
lord can be the name of many types of RL people.
Hence the difference

Sunni

11:49:45 Sunni bunny

I can Lily

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ShiningStar Stables

11:56:57 Chey / Star

Blue
I was so excited to get her from the auction!
I love seals as well

11:56:16 ⛈ whisper/lynx

Em
let's go another canadian :D

Bluebonnet Estates

11:55:16 Blue ~ Poodle Rat

Chey
Oo that's really good! I may have to kidnap her, I adore seals LOL

ShiningStar Stables

11:53:26 Chey / Star

I'm so happy with this week 7! Plus, I can actually match her now
-HEE Click-

11:52:25 sav

-HEE Click-

She looses her little shoulder spots as an adult :(

Sunni

11:52:18 Sunni bunny

I just put one up Lily,

Insignia Elites

11:51:56 Em

Thats so cool :)

Fossil's Dreams

11:51:50 PK or Fossil

*waves goodbye*
I've got to go RL calls-dangit

11:51:10 Rapcoon | Jester

em
I think the majority are in the US, but I do know of many in australia, the UK, new zealand, for example

11:50:58 sav

NC, USA

Glacier Bay Cove

11:50:53 Arctic Katz

Las Vegas, Nevada

11:50:40 Lily/Alpine

Sunni
thank you! Put one up and I'll join :D

Insignia Elites

11:50:35 Em

Im Canadian

Fossil's Dreams

11:50:28 PK or Fossil

I am from the Ohio Valley of the United States

Sunni

11:50:21 Sunni bunny

Am north Carolina

11:50:15 Lily/Alpine

sav
lace pattern, I believe

11:49:59 Lily/Alpine

Em
I'm from South Africa :)

Glacier Bay Cove

11:49:57 Arctic Katz

Bird catcher spots and lace, awesome

Fossil's Dreams

11:49:49 PK or Fossil

God is univeral, like OMG
lord can be the name of many types of RL people.
Hence the difference

Sunni

11:49:45 Sunni bunny

I can Lily

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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